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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Why does everyone keep stealing my names??? in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years, 11 months ago
@hope Inkfeather Publishing, that sounds cool. Although, Inkheart, Inkspell and Inkdeath instantly come to mind, that’s still really good and would work, I think. I like it. *Nods*
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Why does everyone keep stealing my names??? in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years, 11 months ago
@hope is Stormwing possible? It’s only purpose is as an item in an obscure game… so…? *Shrugs* It may pass….
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Why does everyone keep stealing my names??? in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years, 11 months ago
@hope on Stormfeather, I just realised, of other Publishing Houses, there’s also, Feather, White Feather, and Fine Feather. So maybe Stormfeather isn’t so great…
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Why does everyone keep stealing my names??? in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years, 11 months ago
@hopeStormfeather sound the best, but, as @northerner said, a feather isn’t too impressive, but does look nice… I really like the Writing in the Light Publishing, but I understand why you say it is too long.
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic First Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@emma-fournoy Oh wait, what? I was right? Yay! THAT MEANS SOMEONE ELSE HAS READ IT!!!!! *Finger-guns* Good choice in reading. Mhmmmmm *steeples fingers ponderously* We must somehow make it known… *shrugs*
Oh well… first line, first line, first line…. Lemme think… Ah ha!It was a still October night. On the cliff top the harvest was…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic MBTI is Fake in the forum Characters 7 years, 11 months ago
Coolio, after all, humans are complex beings of God’s design. We hardly fit exactly into a mould.@mark-kamibaya
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Calling All Beta-Readers in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper
Beta-Readers? Right here. Ready to help. *Draws sword* If you’ll have me. I’d love to butcher your poetry for you!
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic First Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
Moat house… ooooh…. um, something to do with an arrow. Black Arrow? R.L. Stevenson? Maybe not… could just have the same name… Tunstall Moat House I think… hm, you may have me here @Emma-Flournoy. Black Arrow could be a bit obscure… I haven’t met anyone else who’s read it… I’m probably way off. Anyway, that’s what I’m putting in…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Hey, interesting internet strangers in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 11 months ago
@Devastate-Lasting Aiya! PHILOSOPHER! YES! THIS BE GOOD. VERY GOOD!!!
Erhem, yes, I believe you must be 100% insane to go for a 35 book series. That is awesome. Hope it goes well and doesn’t murder you as you go, well, not too much. I like murdered emotions, makes for good writing y’know?
INFJ, cool. I’m, like what appears to be half the forum,…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic MBTI is Fake in the forum Characters 7 years, 11 months ago
Hm, that’s rather interesting. I guess the main thing I use it for though is to get a rough overview of people on a first viewing, and for characters. As with most things that are in relation to psychology, it must be looked at open mindedly, and not used to label people, cos I’m sure everyone agrees that they don’t fit 100% to their, ‘type’. But…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Songwriting Competition in the forum Music 7 years, 11 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper Hi! Figured I’d toss in my vote/ advice. I say the First
THe First one has a better pattern, plus, I guess as an Aussie I understand it more. It has a cool structure too. More unique, less repetitive than the ones one hears today.
But yes, I concur with both @Jane-Maree and @graciegirl. Syllables help it flow. The rest is cool…[Read more] -
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic *Stands up from some sort of shadowy corner and waves* Aiya! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 11 months ago
@kina-lamb Thanks! I find it encouraging, and it’s good to live by! Glad to meet you!
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic First Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@sleepwalkingmk Yay! Yes it is, good job.
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic First Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus No… unfortunately it is not. Good taste in reading though! Dickens is always a good author!
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper, YES! IT SEEMS TO BE COOL!!! *Goes to stalk the forum more*
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic First Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@graciegirl Yeah, he was a bit, well, it was like he couldn’t make up his mind. AAAAAHHHH!!!! ANOTHER CLASSIC LOVER!!!! And your ranting is no more randomly ranty than mine! ; D
Oh, yeah, um, first lines… uuuuum….
All happy families are alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.
Hopefully that should be somewhat clear. I like…[Read more]
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 11 months ago
@jane-maree oh my goodness. This is amazing!!! I died reading both of them, and the comments, and that picture. Oh wow, just wow guys! Priceless, all of it! AMAZING!!!! COMPLETELY!!! *Notes to check what’s happening on the forum a looooooot more. A lot more. Cos more is good.*
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic First Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@graciegirl Oooh, sounds familiar… um… like, Oscar Wilde I think the name was… um… OH! The Picture of Dorian Grey! I think… Or I could be totally wrong… *Shrugs* Oh well! Sorry you didn’t like the ending. I thought in general it was quite an interesting concept, although, the end was a little, well, depressing? But like, the idea was…[Read more]
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