@jenwriter17
Active 4 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Skredder replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@sage-g Oh wow! This is cool! Great job on the dress and the pouch! And I have to say that I love what you did with her name! It looks really good! You did an excellent job on her hair too!
I might just have to make her dress green in the book. 🙂
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Sage G replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
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Skredder replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@ingridrd Yes!! She is perfect! Thank you! 😀 The hair looks absolutely amazing! Thank you so much!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@skredder Hopefully her hair is how you imagined it…and I wasn’t sure about her eyes so I just did brown. 🙂
And closer…
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Joy replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
@ethryndal Have you done mine yet?
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Rochellaine posted an update 8 years, 7 months ago
@salome01w4g Oh my goodness! *embarrassed* I just realized that when you said “PM” you with the poem you meant “public message.” I am so not used to internet language. I’m so sorry!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
Here’s Hannah’s post:
And now I present you: Potato Squash Pudding. (I also present you my shame and the disgrace of all my authoress dignity. 😬😂)
Potatoes and Squash, a farmer’s delight
A field he grew and harvested in plenty
And without a clue to his plight!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@skredder I may try her today or tomorrow…maybe. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Thankee. *bows* Well, I tried incorporating small ‘good’ things and it’s been a lot let dismal lately. I think I just let Ike gnaw on dismal’ness’ for too long. XD
@sarah-anson I really like the italicized bit you said there. *nods* I agree. Thanks!
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien AHH those are great!
Waaaaait, did you copy mine? XD
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
Can someone please tag me with a topic, too? I haven’t been tagged yet. Just because I started the topic with a sample poem that doesn’t mean I don’t want to be tagged…
😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
@salome01w4g I read your poem in my email and it’s great! Hilarious story!
But…it’s not showing up here anymore. 🙁 Do you need me to copy it from my email and post it for you, or do you have it saved somewhere else? (I’m pretty sure you have it saved somewhere else, since this is an actual piece of writing rather than a quickly-typed po…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Sorry I didn’t get back to you sooner. I am usually only around here in the morning and evening…so anyway…
This version is much smoother. In answer to your comments:
Stanza two; “Most comely he smiled” is better, because otherwise we try to drag “and” out into two beats. The reason for this is probably that almost all – if not al…[Read more]
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Skredder replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
Hello Folks! I’ve got a character that I’d like someone to draw for me if they can.
Her name is Dagny. She’s about twenty years old, 5’6″, and she’s got black wavy hair that reaches about mid-way past her shoulder blades. Now, while her hair is black there are natural streaks of dark red that runs through it. When she’s in the sun, the red…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@warrioroftherealm *salutes* Awesome!
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@christianna-hellwig @rochellaine @emma-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99
Thanks so much for your suggestions, everyone! Here’s what I have now.
“Oh, stars that remember the firstthings forgotten
How earth and its peoples were early begotten
They looked and beheld through a pane of dark glass
The earth in a swirling, untamable mass
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@christianna-hellwig Thanks so much! I’ll take a look over this as soon as I get a chance.
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@notawriter Thanks! It’s not hard to like it: it looks AWESOME! 😀
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 7 months ago
Whoops @introvert_girl
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