Jenna Terese

@seekjustice  *Gasps* You are about to have posted 800 times!!!

@rochellaine  I’m here now! Nope, you read that right! I’ve never been in Writer’s Corner before, I didn’t really know how it worked, so I just didn’t really pay much attention to it. :/

@rochellaine

Yep, and I’m not sure if I’ll get much writing time tomorrow either. But I wish you the best of like in your writing! Especially with your his-fic!

Wow, @dekreel . I can really relate to this. You know, KP is such an amazing place, full of encouraging people. But it can also be used against us when we fall into comparison- which I did without even realizing it. I started to think things like “you shouldn’t even be on this website, you’re not a real writer like they are” and “why do you even…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking 😀 😀 Someone should write an argumental dialogue between a person and her (personified) Sanity.  At the end Sanity decides it isn’t appreciated and leaves, and the the person can’t do anything anymore and has to beg it to come back…

@rochellaine You’d be surprised how often that happens to me… Apparently, my sanity is underappreciated. ;P

@epicaddie2 @sam-kowal @skredder Thank you all!

@jenwriter17 I haven’t tried anything like that, but I don’t know what is causing the problem, so I don’t know what kind of medicine would be the right thing. What kind of things do those treat?

@kaya-young You’ve never been on the Writers’ Corner before???

Or did I read that wrong? 🙂  I have been known to do that…

@kaya-young That’s exactly how it works. 😀  I wasn’t here when you posted, and I’m sure you left long ago, but I’m here now.

You can either just announce that you’re writing and hope someone is around to see it and join you, or you can get to know who is around at what time, or check the list of who is active on the forum and tag people to ask…[Read more]

Ok, thanks @rochellaine ! That’s something I really hadn’t thought about before @daeus said it, and I do see where that would be helpful.

@reaganramm  I just watched the video.

I… I didn’t know you did this for me!! X’D   BTW, it’s pronounced DEE-kreel XD (see signature)

Anyway, thanks SO much for the video! It was really good advice 😀

@kaya-young I didn’t really see anything you did badly in the passages you have there, but I do like what @daeus said about defining your characters.

Each character should have a slightly different voice.  So, whereas one person says “I don’t know,” maybe the second person doesn’t like contractions, and says “I do not know.”  (I have a sister w…[Read more]

Thanks @dekreel ! I will have to remember to show, not tell.

Wow. You guys make me smile X’D

@dragon-snapper  *looks at un-melted chair* *looks at you* *looks back at chair* Whoa. Thanks, Snapper!

Also, when I read “He won’t let you go,” I almost cried. It’s so true. Have you heard that Switchfoot song, I Won’t Let you Go? That’s what came to mind. (Obviously HAHA)

@audrey-caylin  Woww, I LOVE that m…[Read more]

@kaya-young  The first part would flow much better if you separated the topics like this:

“You did a really good job with your prayer!”
“Thanks.”
Who wrote it again?”
“It was Teresa of Avalanna.”

And obviously you can put the non-dialogue parts where you find the most fitting.

At the end of the second part, maybe occasionally tell what the ch…[Read more]

@sam-kowal Thanks!

Thing One and Thing Two prancing through the halls with pots of blue dye meant for JJ

That is a most intriguing idea. 😀

@jenwriter17 That’s your first time?  Wow.  I love it!  And I read it to my sister, and she loved it too.  It’s hilarious.  But what happened to Charlie when you fainted? 😀 😀 😀

@supermonkey42 I love the…[Read more]

I’m not really sure how this works, but I’m writing…

@jenwriter17  Oh, Thanks! The second one was from my WIP, but I’m not sure I’ll keep it because it has kinda taken a new direction.

There wasn’t anything you see I could improve on? Maybe it’s decent, I could have just looked at it waaay to much.

@jenwriter17  Nope, I’m not writing a book. My top project right now is the KPA 😛

Welllll I have a novella. But it’s stuck fast XP

I’m signing off. See you later!

@jenwriter17   Oh my! That was awesome!