Jenna Terese

@rochellaine

They definitely would have been able to see each other much better then, because yeah, they weren’t really enclosed. I’m also trying not to overload the story with pilot jargon, and that’s kind of hard.

That’s good. Are Chara and Uncle Bill out of hospital yet?

@seekjustice Well, during WWI the pilots could see each other pretty well since the planes weren’t as sealed in as they are now, right?  I’ve read of dogfights where the pilots saw the expressions on their opponents’ faces sometimes.

Well actually right now it’s going okay.  I think. 😛  I’m at a kind of boring part so I’m hoping I can get th…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I don’t know, I’m just terrible at writing descriptions of people fighting each other, especially when it’s not a duel with swords or anything, its more impersonal.

No, I haven’t, but I might have heard of it.

Cool! And how’s that going? Hopefully better than my dogfighting.

@seekjustice  Dogfights are cool, but I wouldn’t know how to write them either. 😀  Have you read the Tales of the RAF by Don Patterson?

Well, right now I have my stuff on a flash drive  so I’m trying to work on my western from our desktop computer. 🙂

@rochellaine

Hello! I’m currently trying to edit/rewrite a dogfighting scene (not, like, an actual dogfight, but aeroplanes fighting each other).

I’m terrible at fight scenes, so it’s not coming along very well. You?

@seekjustice Working on anything at present?

@jenwriter17

Yep, I’m likely to be on later 😀

@jenwriter17

I’m editing my novella currently!

@sarah-anson Oh, good question!

Casse: Would probably rather have someone she loves hate her. At least it means they’re alive.

Dagny: Would rather  spend time in a cell with the person she most hates.

Jordan: Would rather have someone he loves hate him. He feels that way already.

Alright folks – Would your character rather be able to fly…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Oh, good! I worry overly much about whether I’ve offended people and feel the need to apologise until I get to the point where I’m apologising for apologising. 😛

I’m sad for your computer by the way 🙂 I hope its okay *sends encouraging hugs to the computer*

@notawriter  Oh, I’m so glad you like her!

@sarah-anson  Those are epic!!!  🙂

I haven’t been here in a while. *scans crowd* Wow, so much new art! Awesome stuff, people.

Here’ my contribution:

~Sarah

Okay, thanks @jenwriter17 !

Ah, okay. Thanks! @skredder

@sarah-anson Look at the above comment. For some reason I thought it was a good idea to tag myself. Oi.

@skredder Oh, you set that up on your profile page. It’s the signature setting.

@skredder Totally! Plus, I think it makes characters much more interesting when they don’t always do what’s right, or are even adverse to doing what’s right until the very end of the book. It makes me root for them more, and want them to change.

Btw, How do you put in the little line between your comment and your username? I can’t seem to figure…[Read more]

@sarah-anson Oh yeah, absolutely! He’s been through a lot, being abandoned and betrayed on more than one occasion. I can see him making decisions that benefit himself best because he needs to protect himself from others. Just what I got from his background.

Interesting idea, @skredder. I’ll try it out. Kirin is a great guy, but I really don’t want him to have “Hero Syndrome” (As in he does everything right just because it’s right.). And I also don’t want him to be an anti-hero, because it doesn’t fit. So he needs to have enough moral strength to do the right things sometimes, but he also needs to be…[Read more]