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Allison replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
The next 2 chapters you wrote are amazing! I love how each chapter draws you in! Like @kyronthearcanin , I am excited to see where its heading!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I love part two and three! The storyline is really good, and I’m excited to see where it’s heading. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Alright! I’m just gonna keep the chapters on here instead of making a different forum, so ignore the name. 🤣
Tags: @janellebelovedpig @felicity @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else
Definitely let me know if Nia went way off the rails… I’m not the greatest at… I don’t know what to call it. Villian writing? She’s not exactly a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Random thought rq, Blackhorn’s speech was normally italicized, but it didn’t do that when I transferred it, so that’s why it’s weird. 😅 Thanks to everyone who reads through that lol.
Thanks!!! 😃
Thanks! And I get it, sometimes I even confuse myself with worlds that I built. 🤣
Hmmm…. Good question. I guess I’d…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
And yeah, this is the same Elryn from before, just younger. I just realized I already put him somewhere, and it would be confusing, so… Yeah. 😅🤣 This is a later version, so that last one had his name with an ‘i’ instead of a ‘y’. But the plan is to make a book later about Elryn specifically, which is the scene in…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @anyone-else-and-the-people-I’m-probably-forgetting 😅
Okay, y’all, so I know this is kinda long (and also I have way to many novel ideas), but this is the first chapter to a book I’ve been thinking about. So… I figured I’d just share it to…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I really like it! I could definitely get a feel for the characters.
I’ll totally read more if you post some more! 😀
I agree with Solfyre, that the names remind me of Pilgrim’s Progess. But of course that’s not a bad thing! 🙂
Keep up the good work!! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic Questions On Blogging in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 10 months ago
Ok, thanks!! That’s a really good idea about having a post ready just in case. 😄
Thanks for the tips!!
What would your hypothetical blog be about? Do you think you would post any of your fiction WIP on there? Who’s your audience? If this hypothetically maybe possibility becomes a reality, will you share a link wit…
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Yes! I love Narnia, and really enjoyed this! Sometimes I’m nervous to read fanfictions on books I like, because I’m worried it will change the book to much, but this definitely didn’t! Good job!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Good work! I enjoyed reading it and would totally read more! 🙂
The names make me think of Pilgrim’s Progress (that’s not a bad thing lol), which makes sense, because they’re both allegorical. Makes me want to read it again.
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Allison replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
I really like it! I really like the characters names and how they do seem real. I dont see any mistakes or anything wrong with it. (Reading on here is fine, I dont think you need a google doc. Are you posting more? 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic Writing Prompts and writers block busters! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I dont think I have tried that yet, but that sounds super fun to do!! Ill try that soon!
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Allison replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Wow! That was amazing! You wrote it? I loved it!
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Esther started the topic Questions On Blogging in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 10 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @euodia-vision @acancello @joy-calle @gracie-j
Ok y’all… I have a very hypothetical idea to maybe start a blog. So I have some questions. (Again, this is a hypothetical idea…)
Do you have any tips on how to start a blog? What website builder do you recommend? What do you write in your posts? How often do you post? How much ef…[Read more]
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Allison started the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@esther-c @lighoverdarkness6 @loopylin @janellebelovedpig @power @booksbyjayna @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper and everyone!
I had a great idea! We all should do a scrapbook! Just post a little bit or a lot whenever, you do something your proud of in writing! Share your characters, story, great ideas, want to thank somebody or just leave them a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Any bloggers? in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 10 months ago
@janellebelovedpig I don’t have one, but someday I might. It’ll have a section for my published books and a LENGTHY fanfiction wiki-type page.
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @acancello @euodia-vision @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @landric @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @thearcanexiom @80strish @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @keilah-h @janellebelovedpig @sarafini
Hey y’all!
Just a request for prayer. Our family and our church are both going through a lot o…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Any bloggers? in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 10 months ago
I do not have a blog. 🙁 But I hope that maybe someday in the future I will be able to! It would be so much fun!! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic Future Blog Post in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 10 months ago
Mmm, deep. I want to think on that a lot more. God says if we seek Him and search for Him with all of our heart, we will find Him. Amen, ONWARD!
It was definitely an eye-opener for me. Like, I knew that to know God’s will, I had to just keep following Him, but when I read that, it just clicked, if you know what I mean. ;…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Any bloggers? in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 10 months ago
I do have a blog! I just started it yesterday though and have a lot of work to do. Its about my familys road trips and stuff like that. Someday im going to make one for me… 😀
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Oops, messed up your tag, @thearcaneaxiom
I will be praying! I know how hard church changes can be, God’s still there for you even in the transition. <333
@esther-c Aww, girl, I’m sorry! I will definitely be praying! ❤️❤️❤️
We love you!
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Thank you so much!! It means a lot!! 🥰❤️
Love y’all too!! 😊
@esther-c yeah, I know how that feels. We’ll keep you in our prayers, as well as your church and all others who are seeking to do His will, and all those who are simply trying to seek out truth in a confusing world! God loves you with I love you can’t fathom, and He has a plan for you, just keep to the faith you hold fast to!
*a not I, lol
I figured. 😉
Thank you so much!! ❤️
Yes we will!! 😄
Praying for you all Esther! A few years ago my family made the transition to a new church so I’ll be praying for you out of the things God showed me and my family during that time. ♥
Thanks so much!! 🥰
It’s nice to know that someone else has gone through the same thing. 😊
Yes, of course! I understand, we recently went through a similar thing but as long as we are doing our best to follow him, to do His will when called and to love him, he will never overlook us. I’m sure he has great plans for your family! (:
@esther-c
Ill defiantly pray for you! I hope everything works out for you and your family!
Yw! <333
Definitely praying for you, @esther-c!! I know God will use this for good things in your life and your family. Reach out if you need anything!! 🙂
You’re in my prayers, Esther! (and Star of the North, your sis!) I’ve experienced some church moves and changes in my life and though they are hard and at times very difficult, my dad encouraged me to remember that Jesus never changes and we can always trust Him no matter what happens. May you find peace and stability in Him!
Of course, Esther! I’ll definitely be praying for you! God’s got you, your family, the previous church, and the new church. =)
@princesachronicle22 @acancello @landric @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise
Thank y’all so much for the prayers and encouragement!! 🥰
(And @felicity, Star of the North is not my sister. She and Arien are sisters I believe. Easy mistake to make though, because we have a lot of people here on KP. 😉 )
Whoops, sorry about that Esther!
It’s all good. 🙂 😉
I’m thankful that through all the changes, God is the same. May He bless y’all on your next adventures for His glory and shower peace with the changes!
Thanks so much, Janelle!! 😊