Janellebelovedpig

@linus-smallprint

This makes no sense to me.

What?!?! *Face-palm. takes deep breath and looks at you. puts on very patient voice* How is this not extremely logical and the ONLY right way of thinking!

lololol.

That was on my mind as I was typing up my response.

Haha! I love that video. (And I may or may not go red every time I see it.)

I…

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@linus-smallprint

I would expect Turin to start punching things, but not Aaron.

Exactly. That’s what I was thinking too!

I hear when girls are upset, you want to just simply talk about it and how you feel. When I rant about my problems, I am not looking for someone to sympathize with me (even if I think I am). I am looking for a solution.…

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@linus-smallprint

First off, you guys are like alien creatures. None of these things you listed would be NEAR my response!! I would cry and want to talk to people and be held, and probably bury myself in writing or books if I was responding badly. haha!! I think it’s so funny how differently we think and react.

Yeah, that sounds like a good…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

K, Linus, I have a question for you since you’re the guy on here, (though the girl’s can answer if they want)

What would you like to see happen next with Aaron? I’m not talking about Physically as much as emotionally and spiritually. I had a few different ideas in my notes, and his “post-battle” “post-death-scenes” recovery is…[Read more]

HA!! It worked!!!

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @theshadow

Ok, here’s whoever I didn’t just send.

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGNLN4vwu8/ho7hf2rHakWJ1OTFshCmlw/view?utm_content=DAGNLN4vwu8&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=editor

hmmmmm, strange. It worked. Then why has it been eating the posts every time I tag people………….

Let’s see if this works.

@theshadow

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!!

Here are Aaron and Sabina

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

https://www.canva.com/design/DAGNLB5MuwA/CfZLSJQSuKkBbOXrIA6HDg/view?utm_content=DAGNLB5Muw…[Read more]

Ugh. It’s broken.

Let’s try this again and see if this’ll send.

@freed_and_redeemed

Sounds good!

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for understanding. I just feel like all that would be too overwhelming and confusing for me. Ya know. I kinda liked how I had the setup.

Yeah, kinda like a mood board.

@theshadow @whalekeeper

Here is Turin y’all!!!

What! NO!!!! PICTURES ARE BROKEN AGAIN!!!!!! ACK!!

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@freed_and_redeemed

Congratulations Freedom!!! I’m so excited for you, (and so excited for me, because I want to read it!!!!!!! lol)

@linus-smallprint

Ok, I have never had anyone say this to me before, and a lot of (very picky) people have read it. I think i might leave it alone, because the majority of my readers are fine with it, and I have also read many books that do this and have never had any complaint with them.

Sorry, I’m not sure extatically sure what this m…

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@whalekeeper @linus-smallprint  @linus-smallprint

Also, anyone interested in character aesthetics?

@whalekeeper

Thanks for the thoughts! I’ll definitely try to work that in.

@linus-smallprint  @linus-smallprint

AHHH!!! I forgot to tag people on this new section! I was wondering why no one said anything!!! I’ll just re-post this whole thing.

Ok, here is the next (REALLY LONG!) section! Enjoy!!! I am hoping for LOT’S of fe…[Read more]

@rae

I would encourage you to play around with it and see what you like. This is a first or second draft, so I wouldn’t worry too much about the POVs being in the right place.

But yeah, I really like what Calyhuge suggested. Sometimes you just have to write and figure it out as well. Definitely write from both POVs in this part of the draft, t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh no! I’ll be praying for you. Is there any specific way I can be doing that?

yes!! Fire away!! I’m ready for it now! I think I’m prepared for people to criticize Aaron.

Your writing output is still so prolific, that’s great!

Aw!! Thank you! That’s so encouraging!

You killed the king and that made me 100% sad!!! WHY?!?!?! 😭…

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@whalekeeper

yes!! I would love more feedback! I’m so sorry if I made it seem like I didn’t!

I was having a rough day when the whole Aaron critique thing happened. 😅

please, go right ahead!! I would love your thoughts! Sorry I haven’t been tagging you! I thought you were no longer interested in this!

@grcr

Yeah maybe… to give everyone time to respond to Keilah

That’s just what I was thinking.

Ok, here is the next (REALLY LONG!) section! Enjoy!!! I am hoping for LOT’S of feedback on this because I do some intense stuff! lol.

The first thing Aaron was aware of were shouts and the clash of steel. Sword fighting? But…

Aaron raised his aching head. He sat up and wiped blood from his face, and then reached for the wall and shakily p…

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@grcr

Aw, thank you! Your’s was amazing too! Man, the paint flecks looked so real!!!

Ok, awesome! So, I should probably wait a few days, right? Like maybe give y’all a character tomorrow or Wednesday?