Janellebelovedpig

@hybridlore  @keilah-h  @linus-smallprint

Alrighty people! Have fun with this very long section! I hope you enjoy it.

Also, Linus, I am starting to have some high hopes for this book, despite what I said about it not being my favorite. I think i might enjoy it a lot. Just let me know if it’s starting to feel like a LTBL repeat. (If you would b…[Read more]

@rae  @grcr   @raxforge

Leon and Julian—with Baron, Ben Gunn, Flare, and Marcellus, Everstrand edge (No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)

“I wasn’t going to kill…Ben,” Baron mentioned in his quiet monotone.

Julian turned and cocked his head sideways, a grin pulling at the corner of his mouth. “You sure had me fooled.”

Le…[Read more]

@rae @raxforge @grcr

Leon and Julian–> With Baron (Brutus), Ben Gunn, and Flare, at the Everstrand edge

Leon whipped about as a voice spoke from behind.

“Are you from around here?” the newcomer asked.

Leon blinked. The uniform this stranger had on was unlike anything he had ever seen. He glanced at the young man’s boots and squinted. They did…[Read more]

@grcr

Oh of course! But be warned, Baron will try to kill you. *sigh*

lol.

@linus-smallprint

I read the updated version of Chapter the 23rd, and I really like it! You did a great job of capturing Alan’s emotions and his motivation, and demonstrating the saving power of the Savior through Charles.

The one thing I’m going to criticize is what Charles says when his son is saved:

“Alan, my Son! I am so glad to hear t…

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@linus-smallprint

This is one of the songs from a favorite musical of mine. It isn’t perfect, because the main character is married and has a son, but this song of his really reminded me of Alan.

Let me know what you think.

I was wondering the same thing.

@jonas

Bring it on!

@rae

Got it.

Where’s @raxforge when you want him? I was hoping he would reply top your last RP because so far I’ve done most of the RPing in our group.

@freed_and_redeemed

YES MA’AM!

I would love to do this! I’ll most likely work on it today or tomorrow!

@keilah-h

100%

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVE IT!!! This is so, so good!

Btw, what program do you use to do this?

*ahem* Alright, we need to work on this. Repeat after me: ALL THE ART AND WRITING SNIPPETS I SHARE DO NOT HAVE TO BE SAD.

But why?

I love sad art!

@freed_and_redeemed

Yes… very sad… 🥺

*ahem* Alright, we need to work on this. Repeat after me: ALL THE ART AND WRITING SNIPPETS I SHARE DO NOT HAVE TO BE SAD.

@freed_and_redeemed

Ohhhh, I am totally doing this for my newest MCs!!!

@keilah-h

TOOTHLESSS!!!!!!!!!

Aw, it’s so sweet! I love it! You NAILED toothless’ expression!

@keilah-h

10?

I think?

Maybe 12.

Come to think of it, he might be twelve for the age gap between him and Asher.

Never mind.

I might make them only a year apart because I actually like that better for his arch.

@rae

nice

@whalekeeper

Okay good. I’ll keep going then.

@whalekeeper  @raxforge

I was writing mine yesterday, but after 45 minutes I was at 1,610, and now I’m wondering when a short story stops being a short story and becomes a novella.

Is there a word limit?

@hybridlore

Oh dear.

I’ve never gotten that response! Not even when I killed Aaron!

I think i like it…… *evil grin* lol.

No, but it is good to know that you feel for my boy.