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@liberty

Really?!?! You called it?

Oooh!!! He’s about to become the Josiah.

Maybe so!

So, is he your new favorite? I was pretty sure he would be.

@liberty

I know! It took Leon getting captured to sober him up a bit I guess.

@whalekeeper @theducktator

Praying!! <33

@hybridlore

Haha! You typed it a lot during TVON

@hybridlore

Yay!! I’m glad I caught you by surprise at least. 😂

It took about a month honestly. I learned web design so I could do it. I was motivated.

@hybridlore

I liked the Wilhelm-actually-Prince-Deitrich twist.

Did you see it coming?!?!

Linus will say he did. 100% 😂

Pretty cool that he’s now a Christian… but it’s going to be very dangerous.

Ya don’t say?……………

😂

Aw thank you!!!! I’m so glad! What do you think??!

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

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The next Sabbath, Hans did not return, but Julian was pleased to see Marius slip in and sit down. With him was a young man who appeared to be in his mid to late teens. Marius leaned over and whispered something to his companion who nodded. Ju…

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@liberty

Something I haven’t mentioned. I’m doing it between any possible sequel to CR.

@liberty

I have a book I’m about to start writing once I wrap up CR, and I think you’re gonna go head over heals for the MC. Or the MC’s best friend. One of the two. It’s going to be a you sort of book. 😂

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know. It didn’t really stand out to me, but then from your notes I knew it was going to happen.

Whaley did make a strong point.

I think you could go either way.

Honestly, maybe a mix is best.

Either your original way with a little more listening, or Whaley’s way with a little more anger.

@linus-smallprint

What do you all think? Is Tyn’s reaction in Chapter the 1st in line with her character? Or do you think she would take a more considerate approach like Whaley is suggesting?

Hmm. It’s a hard question. I’ll have to give it more thought–I found that her reaction didn’t quite suit her, but I can’t really pinpoint why. It might be a…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

yeah, the girl slaves were in the house.

Okay…. maybe. That’s a big gap between the twins tho. I may change it. I have a new character in his 20s coming in.

@rae

I’m a little swamped, but tag me and I’ll try to join at some point. 😊

@rae

I like it! I think the part in the field is the only thing I would fix honestly. But that’s your choice.

Like I said, it’s a delayed hit.

I’ll probably cry tonight. 😂

@koshka

Imperial soldiers are young.

I only have two other teens.

@liberty

Liberty…..

you are insufferable.

😂

NOTHING about Marius and the prince?

 

Oh, and…Dietrich sounds like a very interesting character. I hope you don’t kill him since I like him.

CALLED IT!!

As I was editing I was like….. this is going to be her favorite character!

@koshka

Uh, 21 is still between 16-30

@linus-smallprint

Also, as for them majority being males, I grew up in a household of boys, and my sister came along when I was already in my teens. Sooo…. boys have always been easy for me to write because I can watch them. I find girls harder because I don’t really live with older girls.

@linus-smallprint

Nice.

ugh!!! Why did I know it would be you who would say that?! 😭

This is a big step for me! I used to only write people my own age or eighteen. Eighteen was the magic year that was always perfect to write. 😂

I have had some older characters…… somewhere……….. I know there were some.

The badguys! I had some…[Read more]

I’ve been finished all the work in class for an hour

Doing something useful is beyond my power.

A mere mortal trying not to die from boredom

I suppose I’ll just post something on the KP forum.