Janellebelovedpig

@linus-smallprint

Thank you!

I spent at least an hour cleaning soap

what?!

Okay. Where are all those ladies and older people hiding?

In the olden days girls didn’t really do things on their own. In Roman culture it was actually inappropriate for a young woman to be on the streets alone. Plus, they were considered as property of their father…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Absolutely.

@jonas

This sounds like a cool idea. I don’t write very orthodox, so I won’t have an outline. (just character outlines). I’m also not sure if I’m sharing my current novels on line for marketing purposes. (They’ll be releasing this summer, starting with the first one later this month)

But I’d sure be willing to breathe down anyone’s neck who…[Read more]

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Two days later, Leon was walking home from visiting the Krügers in the late evening. He was nearly home when someone called out, “You there, what’s your business?”

Leon turned around and saw a young soldier lean…

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@esther-c

Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.

You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.

Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.

What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

I was gonna give people a chance to catch up while I busy myself shooting and poor characters and dumping them out of airplanes……. but I think I’ll post the next section now.

@rae

You should make a photo copy of the sketch and try out the colors you have in your mind on that, and if you like it, then go for it, but if not, you have the backup. That’s what I always do. I never color the original, I like to keep a backup. Plus, colored pencils tend to smear when mixed with graphite.

@whalekeeper

YES!!! DO!!!

@rae

WOW!!!!!! So good! The expression!!!!!! That is SO Baron!! Yes, this is perfect!

@hybridlore

Great. Just wanted to make sure you didn’t think I was ignoring ya.

@hybridlore

Oh, btw, you asked about my signature, did you ever get my reply on that?

@hybridlore

Thank you!!!!

@hybridlore

Yes, I did graduate.

Thanks. I didn’t want to get too descriptive for sure.

ah, I see. Yeah, I can smooth that page break a little.

@grcr

OH MY WORD!!!!!!!!!

So good!!!

@loopylin

AHHH!!! I love him! He actually looks almost sweet in that picture. 🤣

@rae

DO IT! DO IT!

@keilah-h

eh, Ardenta wasn’t liberated until the end of book 2.

Also, why on earth is KP just not notifying me??

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 5th      
The Empire

We have continued to spread the word of God in the streets, in the square, and to those we meet. We are rising again, and the en…

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@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

HI Y’ALL!!!

NO, I’M NOT DEAD. (Contrary to popular belief 😂)

I just had the most WILD week. Why does everyone want to graduate in the same week?!?! And why throw wedding stuff into that same week?!?!

Anyhow, this is the first tim…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks! I’ll keep that in mind. When I have to take a paragraph to explain something I think there’s something missing in the book. 🤣

@linus-smallprint

What is up with KP? I haven’t gotten any notifs.

No. You’re fine to keep it in. Instead of feeling like it something I needed to get over for the next part, this felt more like setting the stage for the climax.

Okay, that makes sense.

Do you ever get your dad to look over these sermon/speeches?

My dad actually hasn’t r…[Read more]

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It was late into the evening before the meeting finally broke up. Julian’s words had shaken the little church, and they were ready and open to hear more. As Leon and Julian took turns speaking to them and en…

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@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint    @hybridlore

Okay, here’s a question for y’all.

So, I personally really like Julian’s speech/sermon, whatever it is. (I cringe when y’all say sermon because I’m a woman and I wrote it. But I guess Julian is a guy. 🤣) Anyhow, I really like some of the themes it hits, I like the flow. Basically, I perso…[Read more]