Janellebelovedpig

@theshadow

You’re so welcome!! I’m glad you liked it!!

OK, @highscribeofaetherium, do you have one yet?

@theshadow

I’m glad you like it!!

Do you think Julius is going to believe?

Oh, whoops. I’ll switch that. Thanks for catching it!

Also, did you see your picture of Eldred?

@theshadow

Ok. Here is Eldred. I hope you like him!!

I did him in black and white because I realized I didn’t know the color of his surcoat, and since he is a knight that would be important. If you would like a version in color as well then I can do it if you let me know what color the surcoat is. If you like it black and white then that’s great…[Read more]

@theshadow

And here you go! Enjoy!!!

 
Chapter 14
Julius clenched his teeth to stop them from chattering. He shifted uneasily and leaned back against the wall. Ignatius betrayed me. He tricked me, and now he’s angry with me. It isn’t fair. I haven’t done anything wrong. I was only trying to do what was right, and now I’m locked up like a crimina…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

lol

OH, so this might be a real thing! *rubs hands together* KPers, watch out and grab a box of tissue.

@ellette-giselle

I’d join too…except I don’t write enough to have a competition XDD

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, Jonas has a point, though he really does seem to be poking holes just for fun. lol. (I would be scared to death if he found my WIP, but then again the help would be gladly accepted after i stopped being a little frustrated. lol.)

He does have some good points though.

Also, from the perspective of someone who…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I bet people have said this before, but you should get that published! Honestly, I would read it!

Hmm….. Maybe I should start braking hearts around here. I have a few good stories in my collection. You and I could compete to see who can brake the most hearts on Kingdom Pen!! *evil laughter* (totally…. maybe…. kinda…[Read more]

@rae

You’re welcome! Glad you got it!

Oh man! I’m dying to know what you think! lol.

@savannah_grace2009

Awesome! I love it!!The way Sef makes friends, that is so classic little kid, and I just love their interaction! It’s so perfect! The only thing I would say was when it said Cassian “ran, trying to outrun himself” I would use the word, “sprinted,” “bolted,” etc. Otherwise it’s a repeat that kinda grates for people like me.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I am so sorry…I just can’t keep up with the ammount of chapters you write

Haha, that’s ok! Thank you for the help you have been giving! It’s been awesome!

I was concerned that you might not have enough plot for a full novel,

I wanted it to be a novella, I just wasn’t sure if I could fully develop the plot in a novella, but it…[Read more]

@grcr

Thank you!!! <3

@rae

I didn’t know Sef and Lilitu knew each other that long!

Yeah me neither… 

I just came up with it as I was writing it XD

DROPPING THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Just so you know, it’s not edited…heh…heh…

so just bear with me XD

Tags: @jonas @grcr @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @rae @and-my-brain-stopped-working

“Please! Someone help me!” Neveah gasped for breath, frantically scanning the crowds for a familiar face.

Where could Sef have gon…

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@freed_and_redeemed

I mean like I’m one to talk… XD

I’m surprised no one’s called the Character Exploitation Hotline on me yet…

@ellette-giselle

Chapter four was really smooth and was a lot easier to follow! I don’t have hardly any comments.

Except maybe one thing…maybe give more detail about why Julius is so mad that Marcus is missing. It just kind of shows Julius “throwing a fit” for no apparent reason. Maybe show us his thoughts about why is is scared/angry and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I am so sorry…I just can’t keep up with the ammount of chapters you write

That’s insane XD XD

I will try to go over chapter 3/4 soon, I forgot where I left off!!

But about the plot, I was just wondering what your storyline looked like.

I was concerned that you might not have enough plot for a full novel, but since it’s a…[Read more]

@theshadow and here you are! I’ll stop in a minute to draw your lovely character. 😀

 
Chapter 13
Julius’ leaned his head wearily against the wall. His eyes felt like they had sand in them, and he was weary beyond imagining. Yet, he couldn’t bring himself to close his eyes and sleep. The nightmares were worse then the waking fear.

Marcus was asl…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay, that explanation works. However, this being the first chapter and all, readers will assume that that is just an innate characteristic of Paynes. Furthermore, Kratos shouldn’t expect the smell, and you might want to make him remark to himself about it.

Okay good point XD XD

Unless… How do you want the other Andromedan races to come acr…

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@rae

Hi REA,

did the picture come through for you, or do I need to try and send it again?