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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Hey! That’s awesome! Way to go for you!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@anyone-who-wishes-to-read
Chapter 7
Rage
Pain.
A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.
On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.
Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.
Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
you want an em dash instead of a hyphen
Noted. Thank you!!!
Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?
She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Sef
“You’re like my mom.”
She caught Chase staring, and giggled.
“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?”
She stroked the bird with her finger again.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
hang on, I think I just found them! Is this info right?
Rexy Plays Sports (Rexy Books) Paperback – April 3, 2022
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
No, i didn’t get it. what’s your name as an author on there?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Also, I know I posted this scene but I’ll do it again so that you don’t have to weed through all the posts to find it. ;D
“Ow!” howled Jonathan. “Stop it, Jim!”
Jim, kitchen scissors in hand, was attacking Jonathan’s messy hair. What with the blood, sweat, and two weeks lying in bed, it was frightful. Over the year, Jonathan…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Ok, I don’t think I posted this one. Jonathan had a bad fall during one of their raids and hit his head on the cement.
When they got back to their hideout, Jonathan had a raging headache and his ears were ringing. He didn’t say anything about it, but he never could remember what he put on Viper’s table. Only that it was sat…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Awesome! I have a little picture book series on Amazon.
Are you serious!!! You have to give me a link to it! That’s so cool!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Yes he is! He’s a complicated character. I have another interaction between him and Jonathan if you would like to read it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Will do! Thanks!
Nice, I’m glad the temper adds more. I didn’t have it much in the first draft, but I took the risk and strengthened it a little more. Glad it payed off.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Here’s the next part.
Aaron woke to Turin’s boot nudging him. “Up stranger, it’s morning.”
Aaron rubbed his eyes and sat up slowly. “You can call me Aaron.”
“I’ll call you what I like,” replied Turin. “Now get up.”
Aaron began pulling on his boots, and Turin watched him until he was satisfied Aaron was really getting up. Then, he turned a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you for catching that!
Ok, yeah I’ll shorten it up a little.
What do you think of the characters so far? (Just out of curiosity.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Yep. Also, do you want another b&w like Eldred? If not, then do you want the dress red and dark blue like the picture?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Fateful Night
Here’s a picture.

I know! Me neither! This is going to be fun!
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