Janellebelovedpig

@savannah_grace2009

lol, you can can you?

@keilah-h @anyone-else

Does anyone know what she looks like as a dragon?

@ellette-giselle

Trust me, no one likes Eloy.

You’ll see.

@ellette-giselle

Something bad.

Very bad.

I can feel it in my very bones.

@savannah_grace2009

Good. I’m glad.

Any idea what’s going to happen now? lol.

@savannah_grace200

(poor Eloy, everybody hates him :/)

That’s because we’ve seen just about nothing of him! If we knew him better we might like him. Right now I keep forgetting that he even exists.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah it makes sense! I think it was really well written.

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, I would love thoughts about what he did and also what that reveals of his character. In the original draft some friends mentioned he lost a lot of his fighting spirit after he became a Christian and also wasn’t as rash. It should be tempered but not destroyed. Ya know. Idk, what do you think about him invoking…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Their ages haven’t changed since chapter 6. I’ll try to make that clearer

Huh…I still don’t see it XD

(poor Eloy, everybody hates him :/)

@ellette-giselle

yep.

@savannah_grace2009

Did you read the newest one I posted? The one with Turin?

@ellette-giselle

LOVE IT!

hehehe Aaron I told you so 🙄🙄

@linus-smallprint

here ya go.

Aaron couldn’t breathe. He braced himself, knowing full well that there was nothing he could do. Is this really how it ends? He wondered.

“Wait! He’s not a spy!” yelled Turin. “I swear it by the standing stone!”

Everyone froze, and in the silence that followed the sound of the trickling fountain was deafening.…

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@linus-smallprint

Ha!! LOVE IT!!!!

Standing there and watching like everyone else. She’s not the main point of this scene.

Want the next one?

@linus-smallprint

Awesome!

Sooooo, if you picked up this book would you read it? (It’s okey if you wouldn’t. I’m just trying to gauge my potential audience for this one.)

@linus-smallprint  @anyone_else_who_has_an_opinion.

What do you think of this? Does this grab your attention a little more?