Janellebelovedpig

Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔

Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.

(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)

Aaron is more mature then Turin.

I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron’s flaws whether…

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@ellette-giselle

He was frustrated as anyone would be in the circumstances…… Turin is the one with the wicked temper around here. You can be someone who is naturally very easy going, but who does lose their temper in a certain situation, or at least gets frustrated

Ohhh okay 👍

I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron’s  flaws whether or not…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @anyone_else_whos_intereste

                Against All Odds Playlist!!

1.) Jonathan: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_WNDIybIXs

2.) Jack: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bwvRaHmn694

3.) Villain: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IskFoAob2wY&list=PL61EA7836AA4687F1&index=6

4.) Main ship: There is none.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

Ok, here’s the next part….. and then things get bad. lol.

Morning dawned, and after breakfast and a time of prayer, the men and boys went off to train with the soldiers.

Turin was a born fighter, and the way of the sword seemed natural and easy to him. Aaron, on the other hand, found sword craft less to…

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Okay, but you clearly said he did have a temper earlier, and @shadow said she liked it.

He was frustrated as anyone would be in the circumstances…… Turin is the one with the wicked temper around here. You can be someone who is naturally very easy going, but who does lose their temper in a certain situation, or at least gets f…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay…I’m so sorry…I’m not the best at critiqueing 😣😭😭😭😭Actually I’m horrible at it but oh well

OK, in the begining I said that Aaron was 18!! Turin was a year or two older Sabina was 16! Does that fix it???

Well…you should be able to tell a character’s age based on how they act, without the author saying that. Since both…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

ok crazies…. here is TURIN who is a TEENAGER and DOESN’T have a beard.

ok crazies…. here is TURIN who is a TEENAGER and DOESN’T have a beard.

@lightoverdarkness6

Howdy Light! I can’t remember if we’ve met, but welcome back!!

I’m excited to see some of your stuff, so tag me if you post anything!

Oh my goodness YOU GUYS!!!

OK, in the begining I said that Aaron was 18!! Turin was a year or two older Sabina was 16! Does that fix it???

I would suggest setting this story on Earth. You can still keep the country names, it can just be an alternate reality of Earth where there used to be countries with those names. Your world and ours are…

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Here’s Sef’s playlist

h ttps://open.spotify.com/playlist/6jEIFMjsHRjdyd0I6YYNZV?si=0a7c886240f64036

Guys…

I just made a playlist for Lilitu…

Apparently Lilitu loves rock songs…

WHAT HAVE I DONE?!?!

h ttps://open.spotify.com/playlist/2lQ1Ty8ZiLQv4SK7YCtfDe?si=e606c161acbb4dbe

Niceeee!

@keilah-h

Thanks!!!

Wowwww you’re so good at drawing 😍 I love your worldbuilding too!!!

@lightoverdarkness6

Oof yess, I’ve done that before too 😅 But girlie if you ever feel the need to step away for a few weeks or however long you need, don’t be afraid to do that! We’re always here for you but we understand that we all have lives outside of KP and sometimes taking a small break can be super beneficial 🫶 And if not, that’s great t…

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@keilah-h

Thank youuuu! That makes me feel a lot better about my worldbuilding because I feel like I suck at it XD

Let me just info dump about the trees (don’t read this if you don’t want to, it’s a lot)

So in my story the trees are intelligent, thinking beings, and are often used as Messengers of the Great One (God). So since Azazel killed the…[Read more]

@rae

omc I am sooo sorry! I just haven’t been in an RPing mood and keep forgetting about this or procrastinating XD

Not that I don’t love RP’ing… I love it with everything in me! It’s just sometimes I’m not in the mood or in the mood for other things more. Does that make sense? Not that that’s an excuse…sorry I feel bad 😕

@calyhuge

yep we…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Wow!!! That makes me so happy you read through that whole thing! because even i probably wouldn’t have that long of an attention span XD XD

I forgot to mention Erstonians.

Erstonia is a country that’s across the ocean from Andromeda.

The people who live there are diverse in appearances. There’s no rule for skin, hair, eyes, etc. Some…[Read more]