Janellebelovedpig

@linus-smallprint

Phew! That’s a lot about horses. I think I will grab everything you said about them and save it in a document for future reference. In case you could not tell, Martha likes horses and would definitely know all of this, so in order to have her talk about it, I will need to know it. Thank you for typing this all out!

You’re w…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Ok, i finished reading everything you have written and here are my notes.

Chapter 6

Roof, the poor kid has someone aiming a crossbow at him all day? That won’t make him nervous by any means. Oh no, he’ll be cool as cucumbers. 🙄

I KNEW the crow was the spy. I am sure of it now! Creepy.

Oh man, Phil is the oldest of my bro…[Read more]

wow. It actually went though! Good grief!

@keilah-h @Anyone_who_joins_this_late_and_doesn’t_want_to_sift

Ok, let’s see if this will send…………

The Flames of Hope Trilogy
Book 1
Let There Be Light
 
And God said,
“Let there be light,”
and there was light…
                             ~Genesis 1:3
 

Long ago there was a small kingdom called Ardenta. It was a beautiful land,…

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@keilah-h

Oh, I hadn’t even thought of that. Yes, let me see…….. what if I post everything that I have shared on here in one long message? I work with LibreOffice which is outdated and for old computers like the one I use. I think this would be easiest.

@keilah-h

Sure thing! I’ll put the link here, and you can skim through the chapters to catch up a little.

WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy

@keilah-h

why would you get a lot of flak?

Well, let’s just say my beliefs are not popular around my peers. You’d be surprised how mean both guys and girls can be when they disagree on stuff like this. I’ve gotten to the place where I know I’ve just gotta speak the truth in love and brace for the return fire…. which often times is more full of…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper  @savannah_grace2009(I’ll tag you in case you still want to keep reading this)

Ok, here is the next part. It’s pretty short, but i have some edits to run on the part after, which is very long.

It took some time for the crowd to disperse. Only one child had believed, but Aaron was far from discouraged.…

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@linus-smallprint

Ok, I’ll go for it. Thank you for the encouragement. Give me a second to get another scene.

@linus-smallprint

So I guess what really would be the case is that their instincts act up when they think they are in danger. If they feel more secure, they are able to control themselves more, even if they really are in more danger.

Ah, I see.

Okay. I hope you are able to deal with that mould and that your 18th birthday goes well. Happy early…

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@linus-smallprint

ah, I’m glad we’re on the same page. I was afraid I was going to get a lot of flack. lol. Tell your brother great job for standing up for something like that in an unpopular time. (You too, as long as he and I are both satisfied by the end. lol.)

Oooo, I love the drawings! They do look a little wingfeatherish. They’re quite…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

ah, I’m glad we’re on the same page. I was afraid I was going to get a lot of flack. lol. Tell your brother great job for standing up for something like that in an unpopular time. (You too, as long as he and I are both satisfied by the end. lol.)

Oooo, I love the drawings! They do look a little wingfeatherish. They’re quite…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Well, it’s not like I won’t read them or y’all are evil for writing them. I just don’t believe it’s right. That’s not to say that women need to be pussy cats or wilting violets, but there is a TONE out there for them to do besides killing each other in battle. Leave the fighting to the men. I am not against Women dispatchers, women…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

*sobbing*

@highscribeofaetherium

Or how about we find someone to fix the problem…….. lol.

@linus-smallprint

Interesting. My line of thinking was that the Bible says A.) the world will see us as fools and the gospel will sound foolish to them, and B.) Christ said to let the children come to him, for of such is the kingdom of heaven, and unless we believe like children we will not enter.

@linus-smallprint

Great! I have just started Chapter 6, but I’m in the middle of shooting one character and saving another, so I need to finish up with all that. lol. Then I’ll keep reading.

Here are my notes so far…..

Notes For The Narrow Path Trilogy

Ok Linus, I’m going to take notes as I go.

Prologue:
It’s really good, and It’…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Great! Thank you! Yeah, like I mentioned before I’ve been reading through it! I’ve been taking notes, though I didn’t see the questions for readers. Are you interested in the notes I have so far?

Oh, I will bother you for chapters. Don’t encourage me. haha

@linus-smallprint

Wow, thank you so much! This is very helpful.

Yes, I will definitely talk to the boys (my brothers) about this, though they are a lot younger then Aaron and Turin, so it might be different for them, (right?)

Thanks again so much for taking the time to write all this out and explain it! This is totally going to help so much!

I…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Great. So far I’ve been reading through and I think I’m on chapter seven…. ? I’ve been jotting down notes as I go. i don’t know if you’re interested in them or not.

Did you see the newest LTBL section I posted?