Janellebelovedpig

@esther-c

Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it!

Oh, i’ll keep those tips in mind.

@mineralizedwritings

Aw! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I’m so glad someone read it!

I posted it a little while ago, but no one said anything, and I was thinking, “Oh dear, was it really that bad?”

lol.

I kinda felt like I was reading an anime lol.

I hope that’s a good thing!

@the_lost-journal

Nope, no war.

I should have snooped on your profile. Lol. Then I could have figured it out be reading more about you. lol.

For all you ladies on here, there’s an online camp that runs every few months, set up sort of like our little kingdom here to help encourage writers and help them reach a goal. Before camp you’ll set a goal for yourself (writing ## chapters/scenes/blog posts/words/etc.) and try to reach it in that month. You’re a part of a tent of about 10 or so…[Read more]

Yayayayayayyyy!

I’ll definitely be posting on here this weekend!!

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, I like it!! I could definitely feel and experience what Jonathan was feeling and going through.

The only suggestion I would have would be to eliminate some of the passive voice (“The floor was sinking…” “…his brother was on his hands and knees…”). It will tighten up the prose and draw the reader in more.

But that’…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Thanks for reaching out, Kefa!! I’d love to chat some more!! 🤗

Hmm… my WIP…

Well, I have a few, but a couple of those have been put on the back burner for now. They were mostly ones written while I was trying to figure out my genre. Which, I’ve decided, is probably gonna be contemporary young adult fiction and histori…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, I mean, it’s really no big deal to me because they’re spelled slightly different (Halle and Hallie), and how they look and act is completely different so they’re very different people in my head. 🤷🏻‍♀️

@the_lost-journal

First off, I don’t know how anyone could think I was a guy. i mean, the way I write i’m clearly a girl, and if you can’t tell that, look at my profile picture.

second……

what meme are you talking about? I’m confused……..

Pov you just notice that you created a new character with a name that nobody you know irl has but literally meet someone with that name a few months later

😑😑

@keilah-h

She’s just practicing on the range. Her husband comes out a few minutes later and they have a mini competition together. But right now she’s just shooting.