Janellebelovedpig

@elishavet-pidyon  @koshka    @power

@freed_and_redeemed

OUR HERO!!!!!

The greatest of them all!!!!

@linus-smallprint

OH. MY. GOODNESS.

This was like a treasure!!!! Oh this is so, so good! I can already see some scenes where I can add all of this stuff in/strengthen it.

Ardentan’s betraying the church……………. Someone’s quick on the draw………… tho I may have intended to save that one……….

I do get your point about being…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh boy! Starting it right now!!!! Can’t wait!!!

I haven’t proofread this too carefully, so there may be some questionable grammar mistakes

*sigh* There always is my Canadian friend.

LOLOLOLOL!

(Actually, I enjoy your non American grammar. lol)

@linus-smallprint

The Wilderking Trilogy by Jonathan Rogers is an allegorical story on the life of David, with some twists thrown in. (And a completely different world.) It’s got some great humor in it! I would recommend.

@keilah-h

YES! And Fifty Shades was all the smut from Twilight plus some.

@power

I want one!!!

@rae @raxforge

She’s right. It’s a great book, and the series just keeps getting better!

@koshka

I know!

@koshka

You know what makes that scene even scarier? He actually climbed the real building.

There were safety nets below him, but still!!!!

Yeah, I think you can claim the paralysis gloves. Then again, who knows. Someone else probably came up with them. Or, years and years later, a kid will be writing a book and go, “I have this amazing…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Wait! Really!

Oh wow! That’s amazing!!

@linus-smallprint

Oh yippy!!!!

I was sitting here thinking “He forgot all about it. He’s gonna ask for the end of November.” Lol.

I’m really looking forward to your answers!

@linus-smallprint

Well, it’s the end of October and I have been waiting with bated breath! (very patiently, I might add)

Do you have any answers to the questions, or do you want to wait until the VERY end of October?

@koshka

It’s just so funny. People are like “Look at this amazing invention I just came up with” and then someone else is like “look at this amazing invention I just came up with!” And it’s the same thing. lol. When those movies came out the Gecko Glove Scene was a HUGE thing. Now you two recreated it! Love it!

Well hey, now you got to…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I think murderer could work as long as he said Like murderer, or almost was a murderer. If you want him to say something that he is, he could think of himself as a monster or wild beast. Or, since he is trying to be the hero, an interesting flip would be to have him decide, “I’m not the hero, I’m the villain.” That would flow…[Read more]