Janellebelovedpig

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Hello! Hello!

Wonderful! First feedback! (I’ve over here being excited about crazy things like this)

Think this is a good opening. It sets a darker stage than the previous book, but you warned us.

Yes, I am going for a darker stage.

Also, how the characters act makes sense. Joseph is traumatized and Sabina is trying to be…

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Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.

Frustrating charrie.

YES! 100%

Julian would have shrugged and walked away by now, but Leon used to be that frustrating character, and now he’s trying to do the only thing that was done to him that pulled him out of that downward spin.

@rae

@whalekeeper

I finished school this morning. I get up at five to do it and I work fast, Reading and writing are a strong point of mine, and I have a lot of that. I normally finish around ten.

@raxforge @rae

Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge

Leon sighed, his stiff posture relaxing slightly. “I don’t know who they are. But you seem like you’re in trouble.” He took a step forward. “I don’t want to drive you away. I would much rather help you, and perhaps fight beside you against whatever hunts you, b…[Read more]

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Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge

Leon’s tone matched the stern look on his face. “Then I suggest you leave. If you are not willing to take a risk and trust people, yet you are willing to take the risk of attacking someone you don’t even know, then you need to stay away. I will not have you ki…[Read more]

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btw, is Brutus Baron’s name, because if it’s not I’d like him to give his name as “Baron” soon, because this whole two different name thing is starting to get me mixed up.

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Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge

Leon rolled to his feet, the dagger still in his hand. Julian scrambled up and lunged at Brutus, but Leon yanked him back. “Good Lord, he’s something else.”

Carefully Leon moved to place himself between Brutus and Ben. “Everyone needs to calm down.” He pointed at B…[Read more]

@raxforge @rae

Sure.

Andrew? sound good to you?

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I know they do.

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Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge

“Hey, get off of him!” Julian yelled, rushing at Brutus. He crashed into the young man, Knocking him against the wall.

In a flash,  Leon was at his side, dagger poised. “What is going on with you? Stop attacking innocent people!”

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(Okay, that is so funny what Baron just said, because of something that happens later……..)

Leon and Julian—with Baron, Everstrand edge

Julian smiled sheepishly. “Leon’s said something like that a few times.” He was feeling completely relaxed. Brutus didn’t seem to be a threat at all.

Leon gave Brutus a stiff nod. “I’m Leon.”

At t…[Read more]

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Leon and Julian—with Baron, Everstrand edge

Leon raised an eyebrow. “Listen here, I think you should be the first to–”

Julian cut him off. “I’m Julian Damoss,” he said, offering his hand. “That’s Leon. Don’t mind him, he’s normally not this snappish.”

@whalekeeper

Elsa is a Disney icon (with a lot of bad messages) She and all of New Disney aught to have it’s face burned off.

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Leon and Julian—with Baron, Everstrand edge

Leon let go of his sword with his right hand, but continued to rest his left hand on the hilt. “I don’t know. Why should we trust you?” He turned. “Come on Julian, let’s go.”

Julian raised an eyebrow. “And leave him to follow us and stab us in the back? No thanks.”

Leon glared at him. “You r…[Read more]

@raxforge

You would enjoy this one a lot too.

@raxforge

Above is a little bit or arson I 100% support!

@whalekeeper

Here’s what it is:

It’s time to stand up!!!

@rae

Okay, hang on, here we go.

Leon and Julian

Leon took a slow step back, eyes narrowed. “Be more careful when throwing blows before asking questions. Where I come from, that can get a man killed.”

Julian raised an eyebrow. “You two look like a couple cats about to get into a spat.” He turned back to the stranger. “If you’re also not from…[Read more]

@rae

The post above was a little confusing……. but from what I gather you almost knocked Julian’s lights out?

Leon and Julian

Julian jerked back as a fist nearly slammed into his face. Before he could blink, Leon was in front of him, a dagger in his hand. “I suggest you turn around and walk away,” he said the the stranger. “We only asked…[Read more]