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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 years ago
This isn’t the prettiest rhythm, but I love the heart.
Lord don’t let me
walk with You with my dregs
when I’ve spent
all of myself with the rest.
I’m surrounded by distracting tolls
when You by right
should own my best.
Fix my broken eyes to purely
and firstly view
working and walking wholly
with the fullest of me for You.
(Also, do…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted a new activity comment 2 years ago
😁 Absolutely!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years ago
Hey! How’s your allegory going? I’ve begun writing one of my own, an autobiographical biography– that makes writing easier because I know what God has taught me and then I just have to translate what that looks like for my characters and setting.
My favorite allegory would be Hinds Feet on High Places by Hannah Hurnard. I’m…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years ago
Hey! How’s your allegory going? I’ve begun writing one of my own, an autobiographical biography– that makes writing easier because I know what God has taught me and then I just have to translate what that looks like for my characters and setting.
My favorite allegory would be Hinds Feet on High Places by Hannah Hurnard. I’m…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 2 years ago
But now, thus says the Lord,
your Creator, O Jacob,
And He who formed you, O Israel,
“Do not fear,
for I have redeemed you;
I have called you by name;
you are Mine!
When you pass through the waters,
I will be with you;
And through the rivers,
they will not overflow you.
When you walk through the fire,
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 years ago
This is my first published poem (published on the Rebelution). When I had HFMD, I had to quarantine in my bedroom, a familiar space–lonely, but familiar and full of my things. Then a month later with covid, I had to quarantine in the guest room. And it was scary to be carrying such a dangerous disease. And it was scary to be alone in a “strange…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig are now friends 2 years ago
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin
@elanor @felicity @starshiness @whoever-else-is-welcome-to-chime-inHere’s the next part!
The days seemed lighter after that. The guilty burden of hiding the letter was gone, now what lingered was just grieving her best friend. Little One didn’t often journey out to her garden anymore or…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 years ago
@elanor
Amen. “The Lord is not slow about His promise, as some count slowness, but is patient toward you, not wishing for any to perish but for all to come to repentance.”
2 Peter 3:9
“For to me, to live is Christ and to die is gain. But if I am to live on in the flesh, this will mean fruitful labor for me; and I do not know which to choose.…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted a new activity comment 2 years ago
Cool. One of my favorite essays in school was on Florence Nightingale. What have yours been on?
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 2 years ago
Happy Resurrection Sunday!!
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic He is Risen!!!!! ⭐️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@esther-c @everyone
Happy Easter! He has risen indeed! My life will never be the same because Jesus Christ has risen from the dead!!
“this Man, delivered over by the predetermined plan and foreknowledge of God, you nailed to a cross by the hands of godless men and put Him to death. But God raised Him up again, putting an end to the agony of…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years ago
🙃That moment you realize you read the comments and they meant a whole lot to you, but you never responded to them.😁🤗 Thank you so much for your feedback! You all are awesome.
I’m getting ready to post my next section in the allegory; I’ll try to tag you!
*Happy gasp* Another allegory writer! What’s yours about?
Awh, thank…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 2 years ago
Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I am Janelle. What’s your favorite thing you have written?
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 2 years ago
@freedomwriter76
A while ago you were loving another KP member and shared that you sometimes have trouble forgiving yourself. I wanted you to know that I’m proud of you for encouraging the other member and supporting her. I also wanted you to know that you are not alone.I am so thankful that I have never seen it to be the character of God that…[Read more]
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Janellebelovedpig posted an update 2 years ago
I know you are off KP right now, but I wanted to let you know that I saw your post a while ago about how failures are hard and wanted to let you know that I am proud of you for asking for prayer and reaching out and that you are not alone.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 years ago
This is based off of Deuteronomy 8:2-3
Journey on and don’t forget
the One by Whom you’ve been led,
the One by Whom you’ve been fed
Wand’ring in the wilderness.
Remember the road marked with tears
Yet held year to year
by your Guide Who loves you dear
Journey on and don’t forget.
Up and through and by and with
In dark storms or…
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 2 years ago
Awh, your poem is so good! I can picture all the friendship and love. You said it was from a prompt. Is it inspired by one of your friends?
I love your poem! I too love thinking about God’s blessings and His ways of coming on the scene and bringing transformations.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years ago
Thank you, Esther! This is for the next part in the allegory!
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Janellebelovedpig started the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years ago
@acancello @esther-c @felicity @any other poets or poetesses.
I can’t figure out how to punctuate throughout and also at the end of the lines. Thoughts?
The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever
Desirable far beyond refined gold
Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether
Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb
Turning simple to…[Read more]
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Thank so much girl! That’s a great reminder, and I really appreciate it <3
Great verse btw!
😁 Absolutely!