Jane Maree

@daeus @kina-lamb @audrey-caylin @jane-maree @winter-rose @graciegirl @overcomer @kate-flournoy The hour of writing/planning has begun.

@audrey-caylin @jane-maree @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @graciegirl @overcomer I’ll be writing for an hour.

@jane-maree You seem to have a good grasp there on how these scenes are pushing him in his character arc. Those three scenes sound like they work together well then!

@Jane-Maree awesome. My writing corner #4 SOS was answered xD

@Jane-Maree *runs in panting* am I too late? I was gone all day looking at houses with my family. We had a dunch on the way back (dinner + lunch. don’t know who came up with that 😛 ) I’ll be editing for at least a half hour, if you’re still there.

@jane-maree Lol. Well, good. It’s supposed to be attractive.

@Audrey-caylin @jane-maree @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @daeus @kina-lamb @graciegirl @r-j-wordsmith @perfectfifths @jess I’ll be planning!

@jane-maree Ooh, I like the second one.

@jane-maree Sounds like a good start. How would you say Will’s EiL is tested and moved over the course of these three scenes? Or, to put it another way, how do these scenes build on each other in exploring Will’s EiL?

@jane-maree I didn’t feel like you went overboard at all–both of those examples look great! Nice work!

@jane-maree Got it. Building tension can definitely be an effective way to use that sort of argument. Good example!

@jane-maree, @aysia-serene, @ethryndal, @winter-rose, @dragon-snapper, Okay, you guys seem to be really good at this. 🙂
So I’ve written a couple of short stories of late, and I’ve discovered that most of my writing apart from my novel, are actually a little dark. ????? No idea why, it just seems to come easier than light fluffiness. again, ?????…[Read more]

@Jane-Maree Every time I edit a scene, my mind now demands “what has this got to do with your theme and this character’s character arc?” Usually, I answer “NOTHING. NOW LEAVE ME ALONE TO WRITE.” xD In the scenes where I have been able to implement it though, it makes a big difference. One day, we shall be Masters of Theme 😀

I’m going to go mess…[Read more]

@Jane-Maree *headdesks* that’s hard 😛 I’m beginning to think I’ll be spending the rest of my writer life trying to perfect all my scenes *glares at the scene I’m working on*

@Jane-Maree cool! What lesson are you on?

@kate-flournoy @jane-maree @hope @graciegirl
Well, thanks for your help. I think I’ll just try again tomorrow since its late. Thanks again!
(I will be back) Graciegirl, I’m sorry that poor Erech had to be the test subject.

@jane-maree @i-j-anderson @ethryndal @graciegirl @jess Can any of you see the pictures I posted?
@kate-flournoy *melts the chairs*

@jane-maree Haha! Well good on you for being able to discover it in one of the hardest chapters then. 😉 Does the clash in that chapter change the characters at all in their arcs, or do they remain pretty dead-set in their ways at the end of it?