@jane-maree
Active 7 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper started the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years ago
*holds up Monopoly card* It says, ‘collect two cents from each of the players.’
So, I’ve had this little problem for maybe a year now. It worked okay for first person, but now that its third person, its gets trickier. The little problem in question, perhaps not as little as that, it favoritism.
Generally speaking, I have two main characters. The…[Read more] -
Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years ago
Thanks for the feedback everyone! We’re going to schedule this for April 13th (that’s this Thursday) from 3-4 PM EST. I know this time doesn’t work for everyone, but I hope to see many of you there! Check your emails later today for the link.
@audrey-caylin @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @overcomer @aella @hope @anne-swiftblade @gideon-sowdon @anna-br…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years ago
Thanks for the feedback everyone! We’re going to schedule this for April 13th (that’s this Thursday) from 3-4 PM EST. I know this time doesn’t work for everyone, but I hope to see many of you there!
@audrey-caylin @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @overcomer @aella @hope @anne-swiftblade @gideon-sowdon @anna-brie @jane-maree
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin @daeus @kate-flournoy @jane-maree @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @graciegirl @winter-rose @perfectfifths I’ll be planning and maybe doing some writing.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
And everyone, my brain is bursting with ideas, so I might end up making a sequel for the sequel and a sequel for that sequel. 😛 What do you think of that?
@emma-flournoy Concerning above paragraph, thank for that dare you gave me. 😉
*so much fun!*@daeus @kate-flournoy @christi-eaton @graciegirl @ethryndal @northerner @ingridrd @jadamae @adry_…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@daeus How do you feel about being held captive?
@jane-maree I’m not sure how I would either, actually. 😛 Maybe I should give you a pet koala, and a kangaroo that takes you everywhere like a mighty steed.
@audrey-caylin Maybe the cliched mentor death is a really obvious fake death. 😛 I love the idea!!!!! -
Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for letting me know what works for you all! Sounds like it’s harder to find a good date for everyone this time around. By any chance, would the 19th or the 21st at the same time work any better? If enough people say by Sunday night that one of those times would work better, we’ll do that. Otherwise, we’ll do the 13th or…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper, @jane-maree should be a super stereotypical Australian with neat Aussie way of saying things.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-sapper, @jane-maree should be a super stereotypical Australian with neat Aussie way of saying things.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@daeus @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @jess @jane-maree @graciegirl @ethryndal @audrey-caylin I will now proceed to write.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @dragon-snapper @jess @jane-maree I’ll be writing for an hour.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@daeus Aha. Would like some more ice cream long with the sequel? 😛
@christi-eaton Hahaha! Yeah…I’m not even sure why I asked that question. 😛 Shall I say its unanimous?Okay, as there will be an angry mob chasing me if I do not write a sequel, as it would seem, I clearly need to write one. I already have some ideas, but if any of you have…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 1 month ago
@jane-maree Awesome. Sounds like an effective foil then.
@jenali I like the characters there, especially Shriah’s alternate take on strength. What are the negative repercussions of the Allie’s decision to flee and Shriah’s stale mate? Often poetic justice will include more than simply a failure to do something.
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Help with a Story Idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Thank you both so much! I started writing a bit this evening and got an idea on changing a certain part where I now have more of a fresh perspective. I’m excited to continue and see how it goes! Thanks so much for your feedback! I’ll tag you if I have more questions!
Happy writing!
DelightInLife
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper @jane-maree @audrey-caylin
I’m signing off. I can’t think anymore, I keep getting distracted. Oh look, a shiny object! Anyways, I got 1000 words. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@jess @daeus @jane-maree The foe has been vanquished. The kitchen is clean.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@jess @dragon-snapper @jane-maree Here I am.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@jess @jane-maree I shall join you in this quest.
@daeus @kate-flournoy Are you in tonight? -
Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
Hi @jane-maree! And bye, @graciegirl Another time maybe. 🙂
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@jane-maree, @winter-rose @dragon-snapper @Daeus @graciegirl @anyone
I’ll be writing for a while, if anyone wants to join me. - Load More
