Jane Maree

@aratrea Woohhoooohooohooooooyeahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AWESOME!

@Catwing yay!!! I’m procrastinating by reading Les Miserables. I’ll have a think over what you told me though.

@catwing no, I haven’t asked any one for advice yet. I’m not super secretive about my book. basically, I had the main character becoming deaf in an accident in the first chapter, however, I decided that I wanted him to be deaf before the opening of the book. unfortunately, I have no idea how to open now.

@Catwing it’s working name is Black and White, but only because I am useless at titling books. It’s actually finished, I just wanted to fix up the first three chapters, which I thought needed some work before you and the other guys looked it over. I’m kind of stuck though as to how I rewrite those chapters.

@catwing *coughs and pulls feathers out of hair* which one? In either case, not really anywhere!

@catwing! hello, i’m here, not doing anything, but i’ll keep you company.

@catwing Excellent summary! That sounds like a great story! 😀

Well, I must sign away now. I wrote 778.

@catwing Wow. Hard life right? 😛

@catwing Worry not. It must be hard to be Soron’s daughter.

@Aratrea … I seem to have a problem.
During Camp NaNoWriMo, I wrote my novel of 60k, have been editing it and cutting it down, and I have somehow ended up with a mess.
My ‘Theme’ has been ‘justice’, but, at the start, I’ve been having more questions based on justice regarding prejudice. (ei. Is it just to genetically modify people and then say…[Read more]

@catwing About…stuff… Let’s see. Big dangerous weapons. Rebellions. Arenas. The wild. Interesting things. I don’t want to give any spoilers to the 1st book…so yeah…. heh. 😀 😛

Well, I’ve heard smidgens of your story. I know it has to do with VR, based on your drawings.

Resistance by Jayle Knight, I think uses the second method. It is only when the protagonist is able to trust people again that he is able to join, help the Resistance, and save Kyrin’s family (Kinda). (I am finally back!)

@catwing I’m working on my sequel to the book I just finished. Writing the first ten chapters is always difficult for me.

*accidently makes a chair burst into flames* Ekk! Noooo! *pulls water into the shape of a dragon. the water dragon leaps on the fire, putting it out* There we go. *nervous laughter* I’ll just go patrol now…

@Catwing Hey. That’s my move.

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@catwing The welcome. 😀

@epicaddie2 Pretend it’s a peacock feather!
@catwing Thankee. 😀

@catwing I’m on!

@Ethryndal Good. “The miserables ones” and in general terms which denote outcasts, poor unfortunates, that sorta thing. Think streets of Paris. :/

You pass the test.

Heeeyy imagine that, you know how to deal with emotional snowflakes! Shove ’em in the freezer. How clever.
No. It’s never a dictionary. Closer to an encyclopedia, to be precise. XD…[Read more]