Jane Maree

@dragon-snapper Ooh… Intriguing.

*is jealous* Well, I’m doing school, but I’m here with you in spirit, Gabby. @winter-rose

And this one is for the sequel to Sector One: Insurrection.
Her name is Dyemon.
And she’s awesome.

@catwing To be honest, I want to read it too. *sigh* Now I have to finish writing this trilogy to get there….
Little details: There’s a hat, a jet and a party.
Eventually, it will have beta-readers. Eventually…

@catwing Good job with the improvements. 😀

I also liked @perfectfifths‘ improvements. I’ll go off those and add some adjustments myself.

Alex is not normal. She and her friends talk with animals. (No need to say they understand animals. That’s assumed if they talk with them.)

Then she and her friends meet a mysterious cloaked messenger, who…

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@seekjustice @jess-penrose @jane-maree *feels really pleased my suggestions were so helpful* 😉 😛

@catwing Ultimately it’s up to you to decide. And based on all the versions I’ve read, each one giving a little more about the story than before, yet still keeping it a mystery, I’d love to read this book as well. 😀

@catwing I like the second one too, and I like the suggestions @perfectfifths has made. I would read the book based on that blurb, which is ultimately what you want!

@catwing I prefer your second version heaps, it’s more… blurby. And I also really like the few little tweaks that @perfectfifths made. *thumbs up* Good job!

@catwing HOW DID I MISS THIS WHOLE THREAD?? Well, you have folks with more experience than I, but I’ll submit my two cents anyhow. I like the second one better. I don’t have any suggestions as to how to change it, other than “listen to the other Kapeefers.” They’re a smart bunch. 😉 Very excited to read this story!

Once, my cat was lost, and we found him between the doors.

@catwing He is actually somewhat of a chemist, and he possibly makes a chemical that makes things explode. “I can fix this! Probably….”

@catwing I think I like the second one better, but with a few tweaks (all suggestions of course 😉 ).

Alex is not normal. She talks with her wolves. And understands them.
Then she and her friends meet a mysterious cloaked messenger, who gives them a riddle from a long dead tyrant. They must save Allore by finding three jewels, and giving them to…[Read more]

@ingridrd @dragon-snapper @aislinn-mollisong Awesome collages!

@mariposa So glad you asked! 😀
It’s a Utopian Science Fiction, the setting is Earth in the 22nd century.

I made a synopsis for my book when I set it up on NaNo.

Leifer is facing disaster. With its ruler missing, and an army rising against all that is good in the world, the only thing that can save them is a prophecy sent by the Unseen One.
Enter Amber, a girl who doesn’t know who she is. A girl who suddenly discovers incredible powers she fears…

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@emily

How do you make it have that bar thing before something that you copy from another section?

Select the text and click the B-QUOTE button.

@Shannon Oh, good! *showers you with fun vacation well wishes*

Darn, I spelled villain wrong. Sorry!

Hopefully this works…Darian, the (almost) villain of Embers Burning.

@Shannon @Emily good to hear!