@jane-maree
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ethryndal replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Jess I (obviously) concur with what they all said, but I’d like to add a side note to Daeus’ point: If the world is better off than it was before, even if (and possibly because) the protagonist didn’t get what she wanted, than at least a small victory has been achieved, no matter the personal cost to the MC. The reader will recognize this and be…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@christi-eaton Get over here, I found a fan of the Wingfeather Saga for you.
Hi @dekreel! Glad you found our crazy little corner of the internet.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@salome01w4g *discreetly holds out hand for a high-five*
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Joy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@daeus, my photo is a drawing I did of one of the characters in my novella. I’m not sure what Redwall is, but have you read the Wingfeather Saga? I looks kinda like a fang to me 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@salome01w4g, Howdy! I am from the United States. Can you guess what state I’m from? (You might be able to tell XD)
@kate-flournoy, my poem is called “Majesty Complete.” I don’t think I write in a specific genre. I write mostly diary passages with a touch of poetry and short stories, and the occasional essay or list. I am working on a Doctor Who…[Read more] -
Ethryndal replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
Hullo, @Dekreel! Welcome to this crazy place! Do you know what MBTI personality type you are? What’s your favorite genre in fiction?
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 11 months ago
@Anne-of-lothlorien I feel like to ought to say something, but I’m too busy laughing to think of anything clever.
BRAVO, dear. This is… it’s just… yeah. *thunderous applause*
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Gracie replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Daeus depends on what kinda critique you’re looking for. Would it be basically the same stuff as we did with Fools in the Darkness?
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi, @dekreel 😀
Is your profile picture from anything in particular? It reminds me of a Redwall character.
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Gracie replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@dekreel Welcome to the Kingdom!! Happy to have ya. 🙂 Do you usually write only poetry or do you have a bigger project in the works?
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Gracie replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 11 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien THIS IS AMAZING! 😂 Love it!!!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
Greetings back atcha, @Dekreel! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet. 😀 Cool! What poem was that?
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Joy started the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
*Sheepishly creeps into room, scrunching up shoulders* Ahem, Hi! I’m Dekreel. I’m new to the forums. I have been following Kingdom Pen for awhile, and even posted a poem once! AMA 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 11 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Lovely! XD
@daeus Nice one. You got a line of respect. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you’re decided whether you want to include someone’s backstory or not, and decide to do so not because it’s fun to write, but because it’s heart wrenching and when you say so, your sister says only this, “Sigh.”
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Daeus replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@jess What Kate said. Basically, either the loss your character experiences needs to be necessary for them to become a better person or the ending is just plain tragic, but a side character learns something valuable from it and the readers are left with a lot of hope for that side character.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi @jess! Nice to see you again. 😉
I don’t have too much to say about this, but I will lend you one thought: life isn’t always happy. What I mean by that is, we might like to think that happy endings lie around every corner, but that isn’t always true. Sometimes it’s the exact opposite.
What does this mean for you? It might mean that you need…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Jess lovely topic. I have a lot of thoughts on unhappy endings, but I haven’t got time to consolidate them all now, so I’ll just leave you with the biggest two.
The first is the concept of catharsis. The reader must be satisfied in some way or other. The reader must feel that something was gained; that the world is somehow better as they leave…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 11 months ago
You never cease to amaze me, dear. Nice work! This is hilarious.
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