@jane-maree
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Gracie replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@DaughteroftheKing Signing off now. Thanks for writing! Read ya around! 😀
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@salome01w4g :'( Bye!
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Gracie replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@salome01w4g Aww. 🙁 Byyee. Thanks for writing!
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Gracie replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@Salome01w4g Yay! Welcome aboard. 😀
@DaughteroftheKing Awesomesauce and thank you!! I’m so excited to be back.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@salome01w4g Hey there! 😀
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@graciegirl Greetings! I have arrived. *dramatic pose* Welcome back to the corner!
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Gracie replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@Emily @Dragon-Snapper @Salome01w4g @Catwing @Ingridrd @Allison-Grace @goodness-I’ve-been-gone-so-long-I-can’t-remember-who’s-active-and-who-isn’t-but-anyone’s-welcome XD Hey-o! I’ll be working on some character development and possibly some poetry for the next 45 minutes or so. 🙂 Any fellow writers out there today?
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Emma Flournoy and
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Joy replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@kballen Haha love it!
Here’s mine:
“The journey of life isn’t about trying
to weather the storm, it’s about learning
to dance in the rain.” -
NC Stokes replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper *sneaks up behind you* YOU SHALL NOT PASS!!!!!!!!! (I just needed to know what would happen)
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 11 months ago
@Allison-grace In the Legends of King Daeus, the Wiser *cough*Josiah DeGraaf*cough* has a frog on his head. Oo, and I forgot to mention, if you go to page 26 or so of that thread (which, by the way, morphed into a discussion of MBTI. Shocking, I know.), @ethryndal did an amazing portrait of the Wiser and his frog. Go, look upon it and die…[Read more]
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NC Stokes replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@dekreel That’s so cool! 😀
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Joy and
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd I’m back…but if anyone comes along claiming I must return to the gold from whence I came, I don’t know what I’ll do. Especially is someone says:

that.
@salome01w4g *lights your sword* Go forth and conquer! -
Snapper replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd I can’t hug all of them!! I had like 120 stuffed animals…now I have guilt.
*sigh*
My only critique is that I though the dog was real so I was confused when you said the button nose was falling off…but otherwise it is really cute. 😀
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
*gasps* *runs to tackle-hug the dozen or so Webkinz in her closet*
Anyway. Enough of my antics. @ingridrd The story does, as @kate-flournoy mentioned, give off a sort of Toy Story vibe, but there’s a sort of open-ended thrill to it that almost begs for more. And I love, love the way you wrote “Pubby”. The childlike, wondering sort of style with…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@Ingridrd ooh, I’m getting strong velveteen rabbit/toy story vibes. 😀 I love the open end though; there’s still hope. 😉
And… believe it or not I really don’t have any criticism. It’s adorable. It made me feel guilty about my stuffed leopard that I haven’t talked to in ages. And it has that sweet, half-wistful tone of all stories told from the…[Read more] -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
*blinks* Oh, well, I wasn’t expecting it to be so sad… *blinks again to hide the fact that she’s crying* Okay. I’ll need to read this over again before I can give anything constructive, but otherwise, good story! It’s really well written, and the plot seems smooth and easy to follow.
I’ll come back if I think of anything else.
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Even the king is against me.
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd *cough* Dragons are our friends.
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