Jane Maree

@dekreel I’ll try to answer some of those questions…!

1. Honestly I have no idea, I haven’t gone to the Snowmoors yet in the game.

2. I don’t know that either… haha… I’m being very helpful!

3. Engine Bay is basically a beach. I’ll try to get in-game pictures of the place to give you a feel. It’s not a town or anything, it’s just a beach…[Read more]

@seekjustice I never thought of it that way. I guess I am! Thank you so much for your help! 😀

@lady-iliara  Ohh… Aethasia is smaller than I thought. Thanks so much for the map! It’s very, very helpful!

So is the Snowmoors a mountain range or is it just an area with lots of ice? Or something else? Is there anything west of the Snowmoors? And how big is the Engine Bay? What’s that mountain next to Evercity? And where is Bootleg…[Read more]

@lady-iliara Re-reading your quote, I remember that now from the book. 🙂 Eagle of the NInth is one of my favourites too. 😀

@shannon Oh, is it Princess Bride? Fezzik to the Man in Black? 😀

@shannon Am I even allowed to guess? XD

@lady-iliara *smacks forehead* of course! Eagle of the Ninth is one of my favoueitr books. How did I not get that?

@0-0enyali0-0 you might not have ever been in a battle before, but you’ve been scared before, haven’t you? You have probably been in a situation that made you tense and anxious. Fear is fear, no matter what causes it, and you’ve felt fear, so you’re just as qualified to write about it as anyone else. 😀

@dragon-snapper *dashes in, late to the party, as usual* This, my friend, is why you’re my friend. That was beautiful.

Happy late Thanksgiving y’all, and may we never forget to rejoice in God for the blessings he has given us.

@daeus Hm, it’s a bit long. I’ll try to see if I can cut a couple parts out of it later….

@seekjustice Mm. I agree. It’s kinda hard though because throughout the battle I don’t just focus on one character, it’s more like I keep switching to different people throughout it. Plus, the “main” character that I focus mostly on is kinda an awkward…[Read more]

@emily  Sounds like the Hobbit. Just a guess 😊

@sleepwalkingmk Apologies that I’m just now getting around to this. Glad you’re learning a lot from these lessons. 😀 I like the fact that you’re weaving in a difficult choice for the protagonist into the end of the Venn diagram there. I wonder if you could also include a scene before her character arc which foreshadows that sacrifice scene–but…[Read more]

@sleepwalkingmk Apologies for taking so long to respond to this. I love that story. Aravis’ character arc is probably my favorite in that story, and it’s excellent!

So, this is a new one…

”It’s on him.”

*walks out the door*

@dekreel Oh yeah. *facepalm* Thanks.

@dragon-snapper See above. 😛

@waterlily Hmm

Probably not any that would be super helpful, but I guess, A) experiment with writing in 3rd and play around with what you like, don’t worry about having to revise stuff if you don’t like it, B), get to know your character really well and develop their personality so that you can write him/her easily and not wonder “What should…[Read more]

@perfectfifths I believe you mean @dragon-snapper lol 😉

@emily I wanna say Spongebob 😛

@dekreel Is the “Resistance is futile” in your referring to the Borg? 😛

@emily Oh! Oh! Is it Riley from National Treasure?