Jane Maree

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I’m writing! I think. I might get distracted. Who knows… I’m here, anyways 🙂

@salome01w4g  Ohh, I’m so thankful! That has to be one of the most dramatic Christmas stories ever! The perfect gift: a place to live! 😉 Praise God!

@ingridrd  @gabbyj  Thank you! I had fun with both of them 🙂

Identical thoughts to @daeus Good premise, and if the entire story isn’t going to be as dark in the first chapters, you just want to include enough glimpses of light to indicate that. I don’t personally have a problem with dark, depressing stories when there’s a point to them, but you don’t want to unintentionally indicate that’s the type of story…[Read more]

@his-instrument I love the plot line.

I don’t know if I’ll be able to read the first chapters, but just some thoughts. I think you can set a tone in these first chapters that lets your reader know you’re not out to scare them. If you don’t get too graphic with the murder and torture scene and you give the reader one or two, morally good, hopeful…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking  @salome01w4g  As am I, actually! Me too, please!  And N.C. I’ll definitely pray for you 😉

@his-instrument  I love the storyline!

It does sound kind of dark. Maybe you could like spread out the dark a little bit…?

Anyway, sure! I’ll read it. 🙂

Someone who has more experience with plot line might be of more use, though…

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(P.S. This is comple…[Read more]

@salome01w4g That sounds stressful! Will pray. I know that feeling about cars. I’ll probably need to start driving soon, but I’m nervous. Could you pray for me too?

Oh, no!! 🙁 🙁 🙁

Oh, great. Now you’re making me nervous about cars! ;P

Praying hard!! *big hug*

@catwing Fred from Big Hero 6!

@alia goodbye to you too!

@catwing good night  *peers out the Australian sun at the bright midday sun and scratches head*

@catwing What’s the new quote? 😀

@catwing @alia

As you can see  they await my command. I’m sure they would be more than willing to join in your fight against unruly characters

@dekreel no worries 🙂

@seekjustice  I might have not seen it the first time. *shrug* Anyway, thank you!!

@dekreel i thought I posted the link. Let me try again.

https://anordinarypen.wordpress.com

@catwing okay cool! Perhaps I shall make an appearance one day with my sabre and army of magical origami cranes?

@daeus  @introvert_girl  Okay thanks! 🙂

@catwing  Not bad! My favorite line: “I can cut your cake into perfect fifths! The most perfect fifths!”

LOLOL!