Jane Maree

@dekreel @notawriter Cool! thanks!

@princessfoo Thanks so much for your input! No, Rin doesn’t fall in love with the soldier guy (his name is Jax). I’d rather not include romance in my novels. They become friends though. Just friends 😊

@jenwriter17  It sounds really cool!

The only thing cliche I see about it (putting it next to the video on Dystopian novels) is the fact that the main character is a teenage girl

I’m no expert on the Dystopian genre, so I might be worng…

But still, I would read it 😉

@mariposa Thank’ee! *curtseys*

oh, here’s a collage too…

@jane-maree @dragon-snapper @dekreel @mariposa @aratrea @sam-kowal @daeus @anyone else

Okay, y’all…..

I’ve gotten together a rough blurb of my dystopian novel. very. rough. Lemme know what you think:

Independent teen Rin Adachi lives with the Outcasts. Those tossed aside by the government and society as unfit for city life. The diseased, the…[Read more]

@dekreel oh my goodness! 🤣

@notawriter lol, for sure

@ingridrd that’s okay, I would have said yes anyway. 😉

*gasps* so. good. I love the way you did her hair! thanks so much! and I really like how you wrote her name too 😊

@ingridrd Thanks! 🙂

@daughteroftheking Ooh! That quote is intriguing. 👍🏻

@dragon-Snapper The series is like Jurassic Park, except with a creationist worldview. There’s no time travel in this series, but the series I’m working on now (it also has dinosaurs 🦖😋), has time travel. 🙂

@epicaddie2 That’s neat 🙂

I’ve read a little of Andrew Murray before, although not much, and thought he wrote about faith and prayer very well.

I’ll see if I can find a copy of On Prayer sometime soon. That may have actually been what I read awhile ago, I’ll have to look back into it to remember

@notawriter

You know you’re a kapeefer when you spend a ridiculous amount of time trying to think of a kapeefery thing that you do (That hasn’t already been said!) and then feel bad because you couldn’t

Well, you invented the word “Kapeefery!” That’s something XD

You know you’re a Kapeefer when all of a sudden you start loving the name Josiah…[Read more]

You know you’re a bookworm when you try to find themes in everything, not just books

@daeus  I know — It’s creepy  *rubs head* X)

@notawriter  I did actually consider that! I’ll leave it to someone else to add the raspberries

@perfectfifths  Oh, my indeed 83

@dekreel Oh my! XD

@emma-flournoy Unfortunately, I have not read The Screwtape Letters. Yet. I have a copy waiting patiently in my shelf though.  XD Eek! I’ve wanted to read The Mysterious Benedict Society for years! But, yeah. Still haven’t gotten round to it. 😅

@jess-penrose Yes–that looks great! Depending on the plot/genre of your story, it may be interesting to also have an answer that you can lose your right to freedom if it’s for the greater good of society. (I’m thinking of times of crisis where citizens or soldiers may be coerced to do things because otherwise the nation may be overrun.) That sort…[Read more]

*dies*

@dekreel Henceforth, I shall have to be careful when I get on camera.

Oooooh, yes, that is a very good idea.

I ended up asking a variety of variants of my FQ to people at school today, and the one that seemed to cause the most uncertainty was, “What does it take for a person to lose their right to freedom?” (pretty similar to your suggestion actually!) So, I think that I may go with that.

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