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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Daeus yessir. I stopped doing this wonderful thing once I approached (aka got within ten chapters of :’D) the climax and started really having to rethink you-know-who. My typical writing night was too messy to have too much competition or I would have imploded from the double pressure. 😛 Once I get past the chapter I’m on (wherein about eight…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 YES. Much better. *thumbs up* Notice how the details ground you.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@Christi-Eaton thanks. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 I like this.
*switches into professional mode* Your prose is stronger than a lot I’ve seen, and you show a lot of promise with dialogue and characterization. Your sense of flow and pacing does seem to be a bit off— the prologue was too short and vague, for one. It didn’t connect me to the story, which is what a prologue is for. I…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@Christi-Eaton *squeals* Still love it!
… can I post mine again here for comparison? It’ll make it look awful but I want to see the similarities. Thanks. 😀
*doesn’t wait for permission*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years ago
@Mark-Kamibaya YES. Rogue One. Everyone. Watch it. The more I think about it, the more sure I may be becoming that it’s my favorite movie ever. Seriously. Everything about it was so well done, and the theme—!
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 I don’t think I ever cried so much at an episode.
@that_writer_girl_99 Oh, yes. That one. The poor Doctor… It was so sad. Because you think it’s over and they’re safe and then… *sniffs*
Ok, enough emotions for tonight. And I just finished Rogue One again too… I’m off to bed. See you all! 😀
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 Talking about emotions and Doctor Who, remember the one where there was two Amys? My sister and I… that was the worst one ever. INTJ or not, I just… I couldn’t. It was so sad. *weeps at the memory*
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 What, Sherlock?!?!?
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 Not sure… I like Martha. I liked Clara on and off. Amy and Rory were probably my favorites when they were together.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 Eh, you can come back. Mrs. Hudson took away my skull.
Sherlock is an INTJ, by the way.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 He’s fantastic. Not my favorite, just cause Eleven is so great, and I love twelve, but… they’re all great.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Hey, they were cute. XD
Yep, Moffat… he’ll tear your heart out and roll it in broken glass.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 To each her own. *smirks* I love Nine, but I won’t prove my point with a dagger. This time. You have a right to your own *cough* opinion.
@f5a8c3e92 *shakes head soberly* Turn around. Your face is putting me off.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 And skip Nine and Ten? *sniffs* How could you? Eleven is my favorite, but I love the others too…
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@graciegirl I love Doctor Who too. You’ve got to get into it though. It can be a bit cheesy, especially the earlier seasons. 😉 I love the characters more than the storylines. But the emotions… How can a 45 minute episode start so happy and end so sad so many times?
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@graciegirl @f5a8c3e92 Sherlock! YESSSSSS! Love that show too!
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 *joins my fellow INTJ* Lilypads, guys? I mean, the symbolism is all well and good but why not get something like… like a sword? *scowls* A pity all the poetic people are feelers. We need some arguments for our side…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 welcome to the club. *cackles*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus *dreamily contemplates the infinite*
fyi… I really did write that down…
HA! *curtsies* Excepting the king himself, of course.
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