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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 I promise I haven’t forgotten you. I’m really busy right now so I will get to this as soon as possible, but it may be a bit. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer-Girl_99 I promise I haven’t forgotten you. I’m really busy right now so I will get to this as soon as possible, but it may be a bit. 😉
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@ethryndal *chokes* That… that is hysterical. I can’t believe how much the face looks like him while also looking so… off. XD And that frog. I get the impression that ‘The Wiser’ is somewhat indulgent while his frog keeps everyone in line when he isn’t looking.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@Winter-Rose poor guy… *hugs him* Seriously though, you did great. First person pov is not one of my strong points and can be very easy to do typically, but you did great with it. Thanks for sharing. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus yep. 590 words, so I’m pretty happy. 🙂 Thanks yourself.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus writing now. I’ll be going until two o clock.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus about to be. I’ll tag you when I start.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
*screams*
@Ethryndal aaauuuuggghhhh!!! I’m dying! *chokes on her laughter and topples over off her chair and goes into spasms on the floor*PERFECT. Absolutely perfect.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 could you give me the link to the doc again? Mine is doing weird things.
That sounds like a great solution. Good job. I notice you’re thinking in wider perspectives now— purposefully using the interactions to develop or manipulate. *wiggles eyebrows* Excellent work, my young padawan. 😉
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Ok… so I’ve not read it yet because I’m at a creation conference. I might get to it later on. But… I wanted to share this. XD
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I started one to start getting a presence, so to say. I post about my works in progress, writing tips, writing humor, updates… it is fun.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 6 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus it just doesn’t like me. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Okay @Daeus my post does not appear to be showing up. My guess is it got spammed.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That-Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 well I’m here now. XD *folds hands primly**ahem* You had a question?
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Introduce Yourself (AND VOLLEYBALL!!!) in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
After a rather unsuccessful serve, Faith looks over to @bethanysinkyroses, cringing at the sound of a window breaking. “Woops…” I hope they have insurance…
Waving her arms frantically, she calls over to Bethany. “Take a right, walk straight until you reach the big tree with the purple leaves, turn left, past the virtual ice cream stand, take…[Read more] -
Faith Kindred and bethanys.inky.roses are now friends 7 years, 6 months ago
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