Ivy Rose

@That_Writer_Girl_99 can you give me the link again?

@That_Writer_Girl_99 just barely caught me there. 😛 I may have to leave in a few minutes. Can I help you?

@northerner It depends. I might. 😉

@GraceofSpades2017 Oooh I like it! And I usually don’t connect well with stories told by a narrator, so that’s big. 😀
The one criticism I would have is try to keep the tone of the story consistent. For instance, I felt like you were going for the ancient Native American vibe here, but then there were words like ‘okay’ and ‘sure’ and such that…[Read more]

@Northerner ehhhhh… I’d love to help but I honestly wouldn’t trust myself to be unbiased. *horrible apologetic grimace* It wouldn’t be fair to you.

@Northerner I’m considering entering… I just need to get an idea. 😉 It mainly depends on time, but seeing it is the last one and ‘only’ 20,000 words, I’ll probably think of something.

All right girls, pulling out now. Thanks. I got a fair amount written and broke into a pivotal scene I was nervous about, so I’m happy. 😉

@That_Writer_Girl_99 try this.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 oh no! Is it still Blake? Or something else entirely?

@GracieGirl welcome. 😀
@That_Writer_Girl_99 insanely busy, but I missed you.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 yes! Join!

@Jane-Maree *sobs into your shoulder and smothers you with thanks*

*drags herself in and flops down in a chair with a wheezing gasp* People… I needs… help… I’ve not been on here lately because I’ve been wading through the climax of my story and that needed extra careful handling so I didn’t want distracting pressure (and it also took a lot longer than I expected. 😛 ). But… I’m here now. Done with the…[Read more]

*drags herself in and flops down in a chair with a wheezing gasp* People… I needs… help… I’ve not been on here lately because I’ve been wading through the climax of my story and that needed extra careful handling so I didn’t want distracting pressure (and it also took a lot longer than I expected. 😛 ). But… I’m here now. Done with the…[Read more]

@Northerner nope. My precious idea is mine own and I shall not share it. *selfishly hoards it all* I will be participating though, and yes, I believe all submissions get feedback.

@Ethryndal I’ll be praying.

@GraceofSpades2017 yes! We are. Sisters. *grins* And I’m older, though she may be taller. XD
Welcome to Kingdom Pen.

@Dragon-Snapper no no, you missed it! They weren’t hoping for themselves. They did what they did in hopes that the people who survived them could use it to make a better world. In faith, I guess.

And… I haven’t watched a ton of Disney, so I guess I didn’t have that problem. For myself, I can just say I don’t think I’ve ever related to an…[Read more]