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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
I know you’re from WA @perfectfifths. Are you in Albany yourself??? I would love to visit WA one day.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Thank you @emma-flournoy and @spradlin.
@perfectfifths I’m in the Victoria.
This is my kind of country. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Same here. The editing part that is. 😉 I’m still going. 🙂
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BlueJay posted an update 9 years, 6 months ago
People who have read my Golden Conch story. Hmm…let me see. @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @winter-rose, @corissa-maiden-of-praise, @overcomer, anyone else???
I have a problem! If Claudia is at risk when she walks in the streets (and I have made it so she is, she has to have bodyguards if she leaves the palace) then she would be just at much at risk at…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Still here. Tag me when you leave. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Merci pour le compliment
@the-bean Thank you for the compliment??? Am I right???
Is anyone still writing? Cause I am. @dragon-snapper, @daeus, @winter-rose, @kate-flournoy, @faithdk, @overcomer
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths; @daeus; @winter-rose (And anyone else)
Thank you for praying. Just after I posted my request, I ended up chucking up. 🙁 It might have been because I was trying to take some medicine which wasn’t the nicest. After that was over, I sat outside and just rested. None of you Americans will probably understand this, but watching gum…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@His-Instrument ummm… about thirty minutes… east? of Circleville. But our ‘travel-zone’ is usually limited to around an hour either way unless we’re going to do something really special all together, in which case we have to wait for a day with comparatively little cabin-related work, which are few and far between. Also we practically don’t…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@His-Instrument I appreciate your flexibility and efforts, but I’m afraid not. 🙁 See, I’m not driving yet, so one of my parents would have to take the time to drive me, which would take them away from the cabin business and leave the other half of the family to do all the cleaning work themselves, and while I’m sure we could manage if we had to,…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy posted an update 9 years, 6 months ago
@sarah-h Hello Sarah, I just wanted to say thanks really quick for welcoming Kenya back. Maybe it’s a little thing, but little things are important. I personally don’t agree with everything she writes, but I also believe hospitality is a big part of life in Christ, so I want to thank you for taking the opportunity to welcome her and not debate…[Read more]
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@kate-flournoy Thank you. 🙂 I’m glad you think I did the right thing. I wasn’t sure if it would irritate her, but I wanted to say something kind.
P.S. I hope you didn’t mind that I decided not to debate you. I kind of forgot to say that.-
@Sarah-H you can’t go wrong with kindness. 😉
No, I didn’t mind at all.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Catching Trout in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
I think @kate-flournoy and the others might have already said all this, but my main thought on hooks and first lines is that it needs to present a question. It doesn’t normally ask a question outright, but the question is implied. If the story starts with dialogue, we wonder who is talking. If it says ‘once only God knew the day that you would…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
I’m sick. Can people please be praying for my recovery? And praying that I don’t vomit either. Thank you in advance. 🙂 🙂 🙂
@perfectfifths, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @anyone & @everyone
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
I’m sick. Can people please be praying for my recovery? And praying that I don’t vomit either. Thank you in advance. 🙂 🙂 🙂
@perfectfifths, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @anyone & @everyone -
Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Help? Does this sound like a good idea? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
@mark-kamibaya yeah. I always though that series was just weird. But the way my characters and their world is designed is nothing like Animorphs. Thank you though:)
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Little Brown Dog replied to the topic Help? Does this sound like a good idea? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Awww thank you @emma-flourney !
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Kate Flournoy posted an update 9 years, 6 months ago
@daeus hey, just thought I’d let you know I’m not going to be writing tonight or tomorrow. Tonight visiting some friends, same tomorrow, though different friends. The Brandyberries? I believe you’re familiar with them? They live about ten minutes from my grandparents’. 😀
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Ha! Yeah, my dad taught Elisha and Noah computer programming. Tell them hi for me.
Alright, well, that’s not too bad since I wasn’t able to write tomorrow anyway. We’re taking some friends to the ark.-
Oooh, fun! Enjoy it. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Fun Way to Get to Know Your Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus no, she’s talking like I do not-online. XD
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Greta replied to the topic Book Spine Poetry in the forum Poetry 9 years, 6 months ago
@spradlin
Oh, that would be so neat! I would totally enter a Book Spine Poetry Contest thingy. 😛 😉 -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A writing idea. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Every day? Heh… no pressure. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A writing idea. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus someday you are going to be a billionaire. 😛
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My memory’s not perfect. Was the danger of her getting assassinated? If so, could the there just be guards at all the entrances to the ball to make sure no one is carrying weapons?
Ah @daeus That might work.
@Bluejay I was thinking something along those lines too…security guards of some sort in the ballroom.
Kinda hard to dance when you have bodyguards, I’m sure. 😛
@emma-flournoy Haha. Yep, that’s what I’ve gone with.