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@daughteroftheking 😀 😀 Someone should write an argumental dialogue between a person and her (personified) Sanity.  At the end Sanity decides it isn’t appreciated and leaves, and the the person can’t do anything anymore and has to beg it to come back…

@kaya-young You’ve never been on the Writers’ Corner before???

Or did I read that wrong? 🙂  I have been known to do that…

@kaya-young That’s exactly how it works. 😀  I wasn’t here when you posted, and I’m sure you left long ago, but I’m here now.

You can either just announce that you’re writing and hope someone is around to see it and join you, or you can get to know who is around at what time, or check the list of who is active on the forum and tag people to ask…[Read more]

@reaganramm  I just watched the video.

I… I didn’t know you did this for me!! X’D   BTW, it’s pronounced DEE-kreel XD (see signature)

Anyway, thanks SO much for the video! It was really good advice 😀

@kaya-young I didn’t really see anything you did badly in the passages you have there, but I do like what @daeus said about defining your characters.

Each character should have a slightly different voice.  So, whereas one person says “I don’t know,” maybe the second person doesn’t like contractions, and says “I do not know.”  (I have a sister w…[Read more]

Wow. You guys make me smile X’D

@dragon-snapper  *looks at un-melted chair* *looks at you* *looks back at chair* Whoa. Thanks, Snapper!

Also, when I read “He won’t let you go,” I almost cried. It’s so true. Have you heard that Switchfoot song, I Won’t Let you Go? That’s what came to mind. (Obviously HAHA)

@audrey-caylin  Woww, I LOVE that m…[Read more]

@kaya-young  The first part would flow much better if you separated the topics like this:

“You did a really good job with your prayer!”
“Thanks.”
Who wrote it again?”
“It was Teresa of Avalanna.”

And obviously you can put the non-dialogue parts where you find the most fitting.

At the end of the second part, maybe occasionally tell what the ch…[Read more]

@sam-kowal Thanks!

Thing One and Thing Two prancing through the halls with pots of blue dye meant for JJ

That is a most intriguing idea. 😀

@jenwriter17 That’s your first time?  Wow.  I love it!  And I read it to my sister, and she loved it too.  It’s hilarious.  But what happened to Charlie when you fainted? 😀 😀 😀

@supermonkey42 I love the…[Read more]

Oh, I have to tag someone…

@aislinn-mollisong I just noticed no one ever tagged you! Your prompt is: a hobbit riding a dragon. Yes, it’s random. 😀

signing off…

@supermonkey42 *gobbles ice cream* oh my goodness isn’t homemade ice cream THE BEST?! McDonald’s McFlurries don’t have anything on homemade ice cream!

@kaya-young I’m by no means an expert on dialogue, buy yeah it looked good to me 🙂

@jenwriter17  The poem happened because my mom made homemade ice cream tonight. 😀 *Hands you a bowl of ice cream*

@dekreel k, bye! 🙂

@supermonkey42 yeah….I might’ve fainted too 😉

@kaya-young I thought this was good; I actually really liked the second bit 🙂

@supermonkey42 I loved this! *looks in freezer for ice cream*

@jenwriter17  Nope, I’m not writing a book. My top project right now is the KPA 😛

Welllll I have a novella. But it’s stuck fast XP

I’m signing off. See you later!

@jenwriter17 😀 That would be a weird sight—an octopus ball.

@rochellaine All right, here’s my poem (which also turned into a history of ice cream 😉 )…[Read more]