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Active 8 years ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Story Tagging in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@sam-kowal Wow. Stan’s quite the storyteller. 😀
Part 3 of Story #2:
Freda froze. Again. The stone puppy’s outline gradually solidified, like a camera coming into focus. Its glowing red eyes flickered on slowly, and then it raised its head and looked Freda in the eyes. Then it jumped.
Freda panicked. She looked around for something to defend…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper Oh, didn’t see your earlier post. Byeeeee
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper Still here?
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@skredder Well done! See ya later 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper Ohhhh, I see
Yup. Gamma and epsilon are Greek.
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Snapper replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel Well, I was going by the military version. Gamma an Epsilon… I think those are Greek? Or some other version.
I don’t know. That’s just what I’m calling them.
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Joy replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper Ahhh, interesting! 🙂
Why aren’t they called Gamma and Epsilon? (Honestly Charlie and Echo are awesome names, it’s just…)
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Snapper replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel Alpha – 1st readers of unedited work.
Beta – 2nd readers of 1st edits
Charlie – 3rd readers of 2nd edits.
Delta – 4th readers of 3rd edits.
Echo – 5th readers of 4th edits.
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Joy replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper Alpha? Beta? Charlie?! How many types of proofreading are there?!
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Snapper replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@warrenluther04 Lol. *pats shoulder* There there. You’re only ah… two months late.
LOL Yes you can read it. BUT, you’ll probably have to wait a bit until I’m done with this round of edits. Then, I’ll ask for another round of beta-readers (charlie-readers). But I will need that kind of people, so I’ll be sure to tag you if you’re available…[Read more]
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Snapper started the topic Choppy Writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
So recently (okay, not recently). For the past TWO novels, I’ve been really focusing on the show don’t tell thing. That in itself is all right. I don’t know how to do otherwise now. However, it creates another sort of problem.
Choppiness.
Due to the fact that I’m not exactly writing a school essay and transitions such as ‘furthermore’ won’t…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper Same, though. XD
Thanks for the melt. I needed that. *forces self to return to story* Sheesh. “Favorite part,” I said.
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Joy replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@daeus HA! Yes, you are SO friendly and kind. As friendly and kind as a lamb. (get it? XP )
(That was perfect timing… X’D )
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel 😀 *melts walking stick* I SHALL WRITE UNASSISTED!
SNAPPER, quit getting distracted. -
Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@skredder That’s funny! *blinks* *takes note*
Wellll it’s one of my favorite parts because it involves a certain batch of someones whom I really like… but I shall spare no details 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper *hands walking stick to my brain* Sighhh
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Joy replied to the topic Encouragement Thread in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine Aw, thank you!! I love talking to you, too. Despite the element of mistrust… X)
@daeus Seconding Snapper. you are an awesome king, so friendly to everyone!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel Yep. I’m old now.
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