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@jenwriter17 Haha, I’m sorry.  I was telling SeekJustice a couple of days ago that the editing is the easiest part for me.  It’s the writing that’s much harder!  It can take me a couple of hours to edit something that took me several days to write.  Sounds like you have the opposite problem. 😛

@daughteroftheking good idea about the antagonist; i can tend to not put enough work in the antagonist.

She has one best friend (Christy), but since she’s major-super introverted, she doesn’t really have any more. I was thinking of making her bestie the villain, but then it seemed kinda obvious.

I think at first she will hate having the powers,…[Read more]

@rochellaine Yes, poor Zac….was trying not to cry while I’m at my aunt’s house 😉

Editing’s going okay. This is how I’m feeling though:

the book looks so much worse when I go back to edit 🙁

@rochellaine cool ideas! 😀

yes, I agree. God created us all equal and skin color doesn’t make anyone better or worse than someone else. I like your description suggestions. It’s the ‘charcoal skin’ part that people are super sensitive about I think. Skin descriptions that might be just fine people would think offensive. I’m not saying ‘charcoal…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Yes!  Seriously, you kept raving about Justice, but I didn’t like him in the first book because he was too emotionless, and while I like him better in this book, he’s now an emotional wreck, basically, and I much prefer Zac.  SeekJustice says if Quillon came alive she’d marry him, but it’d have to be Zac for me. 😛

Ah, yes.  And my…[Read more]

@rochellaine Just saw your comment ‘tell Zac I will marry him’! haha, seriously though, I feel the same. 😛

Just reached the end of everything. Man, that book was emotionally draining… but so. good.

@jenwriter17 I think I’d had a nap that afternoon, and when I have a really long nap I don’t get tired at night.  Therefore it’s not a very good idea for me to take a nap, usually… 😛

Of course he is!  Zac is the best character out of both books. 😉

At the end of the document there are comments from a couple of the readers, which were pretty f…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira I think I’ve only read three of them, and since they’re stand-alone there might be a few that I would like.  First-off, the thing that till make the most sense to you is I don’t like darkness.  And his stories are full of that.

Now, about the specific stories.  One was advocating the right to kill one person to save many.  That is…[Read more]

@rochellaine WHAT 4 AM?! O.O

I love Zac!!!!!! Lemme guess, he’s your favorite too? 😛

@ariel-ashira Haha!  I do get tired sometimes, you know. 😉

@jenwriter17 Nope. 😛  I think the lastest we’ve gone to was 4:00 a.m. one time. 😮

How’s it going?  Who’s your favorite character now that you’re almost done with the book?  (Give you three guesses on mine…)

@ariel-ashira 🙁 bye

@rochellaine Hi! 😀 Seekjustice and I missed you during our late night chat 😉 (it wasn’t nearly as late as some of your chats 🙂 )

@ariel-ashira reading the last part of Seekjustice’s book, then I plan to do more editing.

@jenwriter17 @ariel-ashira Halloo!

@ariel-ashira Yay! what are you working on?

@ariel-ashira @alia @kaya-young @skredder @rochellaine Anyone on?

@jenwriter17 Whenever I hear “superhero WIP” I become wary because I pretty much hate Josiah’s stories, but I’ll try to give an unbiased opinion. 😛

So…my first thought on reading your ideas was that if I read the book I would immediately think her grandparents were villains.  Maybe you should play this up a bit, and either have her trust them…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Yes, her grandparents really love her a ton. Kaylee was told her parents died in a car accident, but I want the accident to be linked to some superhero business of some sort (maybe they were heroes???). haven’t quite figured out the theme.

yeah I guess Pinterest boards can tell a lot about a person 😉

thank you! 🙂

@skredder ooh yeah that’s a good idea *writes it down* thank you! <3

Aaaaand forgot to tag people 😛 @rochellaine @kaya-young @alia @ariel-ashira @seekjustice @catwing @daughteroftheking @claire-c @skredder @ingridrd