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@seekjustice I’ll have to read it later tonight.  I’ve got to go now for a while I think. 🙁

@seekjustice  Which one?

Oh, and sorry I never came back to beta-reading SFI. I lost the notes page you emailed me and then life happened annnnd. . . yeah. So sorry. 😛 🙁

@valtmy  Sounds tedious. 😛

I’m doing more fan stuff. As usual.

@seekjustice It took a while, but I found it! 😛  You said you had no idea where the pairing between Rain and Kendall came from?  Here’s the quote from your first draft:

I felt myself drifting off to sleep, the grass prickling my neck and tickling my ear. Then I smiled. “Hey, Rain, you’ve got a thing for Kendall, don’t you?”…

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@seekjustice

There isn’t a link?

@dekreel

Hello. I’m working on my WIP. Got stuck for a while before I realised that it does not make sense for the scene I am writing to go the way I had planned so I am doing backtracking.

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I think I’ll try to hack away this plot hole a bit. How are y’all doing? 🙂

@seekjustice

Haha your book is not even published yet and you are already pandering to the fanbase? 😛

Yes, Kendall really, really needs to be developed more. If removing all romantic hints is needed for that, I’ll say go for it. You are already in a dilemma regarding the genre of SFI, right? 😛 (Whether or not it should be a dystopian or not).…[Read more]

@seekjustice I will admit, had Rain in the first draft been carrying a torch for Quillon, it’s very likely I would have liked it that way.  I think I may have told you this before.

Ohh…do you picture “carrying the torch” as “carrying the flashlight” since you’re Australian?  I just thought of that…and it’s a very disturbing thought. 😛 (You d…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Hi. Yes, I’m still around. Unfortunately, I’ve been sick 🙁 (But I promise I am still working on Part 3 of QOD, @seekjustice so do not worry!)

@seekjustice

Sure, I’d love to take a look. 🙂

As for your character pairings… Apart from Chessy’s silly crush, I honestly don’t have much of an opinion on that matter actually since I don’t really think of SFI as a romance so I did not read it as such.

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@valtmy Hello!  I didn’t get a chance to say hi before dinner happened. 🙂  Are you still here?  How are you doing?

@seekjustice

I think that’s where my perspective is different from others.  I would possibly represent the readers who have not read/do not know well the story of Les Miserables as I had but once skimmed through Les Mis a while before I read the first draft of Stars, and did not notice the connection, so I viewed it simply as a novel of…[Read more]

@seekjustice

Dinner now, I’ll be back in a little while probably.  Hope you’re still on then.

When I was younger I used to skip the prologues along with the Author’s Notes and Introductions.  Now I read all three…as well as the dedication. 😛 But the prologue is most important to the story. 🙂

Oh, were there others who agreed with me about R…[Read more]

@rochellaine @seekjustice

Hi, it’s been SO long since I talked to you guys on this forum. 😀

Ooh the third draft of SFI? Yes, I do believe that the thing about the prologue was one point that I raised for my review.

@seekjustice Hello!!! 😀 😀

It’s almost time for dinner, but I’m working on law school for a bit.

How’s SFI going?  You’re still not going to put Rain and Kendall back together, are you? 😉 😛

*thinks of all my favorite parts and hopes you’ll keep them* 😉

@photobloggergal  YAAAAS ANOTHER WAYWARD KAPEEFER YEEEP

Anyway, welcome back!!! And congratulations! 😀 😀 😀

@seekjustice So now you are not simply a day in our future.  Now you are in a completely different year! 😛

@rochellaine @jenwriter17 @seekjustice

Anyone around?

@jenwriter17 Are you still here?