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@jenwriter17  Ahhh, church history… That stuff doesn’t stick to my brain. I don’t know about you XD *pats head (mane?) back*

@jenwriter17  Yep! Trying to make sense of this chemistry book… *squints at periodic table*

@ariella-newheart  I mean aren’t there some… undignified parts?

@kaya-young  It depends on what your dialogue looks like. If you post a piece here or something, I’d be more than happy to give you some pointers 🙂

Overall, my best piece of advice is to make sure that your characters’ vocab isn’t far-fetched. Especially if your story is contemporary or futuristic. For example, this sentence, “Can we progress…[Read more]

@everyone Yay! i’m excited for this! 🙂

@jenwriter17  I’d like to try! I might be busy though

@jenwriter17  WAIT! I’M HERE! *groans*

Anyway, I’m here, reading for school, too

@jenwriter17 I was actually about to say the same thing. 😀  So goodbye, and we leave an empty Writers’ Corner for someone to fill.

@rochellaine 😀 😀 XD He does. He’s already come up with commentary to expound upon it. “It is possible, with dignity, to sweep a carpet. It is possible to trade with coins. But there is no dignified way to melt a chair but by the flames of a dragon.”

Wow 😀 That is a long one, yourself. XD I have read the Cat in the Hat! And it’s one of my…[Read more]

@seekjustice Okay, bye!  will you be on again at three or four pm your time like you usually are?

@ingridrd Oh, byeeee!  See you later!

@ingridrd Okay, all good!  Haha!  So I guess if I ever do write a poem that I post on the forum for critique you want to be tagged…

But right now everything I’m working on is prose. 😀

Now that I’m finished with my poem I’m going back to my his-fic short story.  How’s your brainstorming coming along?

@jenwriter17 The Cat in the Hat is amazing.  He can do so many things, can’t he?  Except, of course, control Things One and Two…

Yes!  That is exactly what I meant.  A ball attended by octopi.  Have fun storming the brain!  (You think it’ll work?)

You get ten more points if you can recognize and answer my quote with the last line of it. 😀

@ingridrd Um…I already tagged two people, but if you go over to the topic and ask to be tagged the next person to write a poem will tag you.

Sorry I missed you! 🙁

@jenwriter17 Sounds great!  I think this is going to be fun and interesting.

@jenwriter17 This sounds cool! I have a lot of other bible reading i’m working on but I have had quite a bit of free time so I could maybe.. probably work it in! 😀 *thumbs up*

@jenwriter17 You have been tagged!  Congratulations, and good luck, because you’ll probably need it… 🙂

@sam-kowal Here’s the Blue Hair poem you asked for…

(I really hope you’ve read The Cat in The Hat because if you haven’t this will not make any sense!)

Thing One’s Lament

Oh, what a tragedy it is
To have brown hair,
When all the time you know it should
Be blue that’s there!
My hair was once a lovely shade
Of bright, bright blue
But now it’s…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Yup!  I’m going to post it in the Comic Poem topic.

I’m just about done, and am about to post, but first I have to decide who to tag and with what topic…

Are you interested in being tagged? 😀 😀

@seekjustice Wow. You ARE early! 😀