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Alia replied to the topic God Keeps in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
here is the updated version.
oh, and should i change the name?
God Keeps
God keeps His eyes the fallen leaves
The leaves that the trees deems of no consequenceGod keeps His eyes on the fallen people
The people that the world deems of no consequenceGod keeps His eyes on the fallen of the world
So what right does…[Read more] -
Alia replied to the topic God Keeps in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
here is the updated version.
God Keeps
God keeps His eyes the fallen leaves
The leaves that the trees deems of no consequenceGod keeps His eyes on the fallen people
The people that the world deems of no consequenceGod keeps His eyes on the fallen of the world
So what right does the world have to say they are no…[Read more] -
Alia replied to the topic God Keeps in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
here is the updated version.
God Keeps
God keeps His eyes the fallen leaves
The leaves that the trees deems of no consequenceGod keeps His eyes on the fallen people
The people that the world deems of no consequenceGod keeps His eyes on the fallen of the world
So what right does the world have to say they are no…[Read more] -
Christine Eaton started the topic Shh, It's a surprise birthday party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Well for those of you who don’t know today is @anne-swiftblade‘s aka Sarah van den Ham’s 16th birthday! I figured we should all celebrate this wonderful day of her birth. So throw around those hearty huzzah’s, @daeus you can supply us with all the cookies and ice cream and we’ll have a jolly good time. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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ClaireC started the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Write your prayer request and tag at least 5 people to pray for you (so someone definitely sees it.) If you’re tagged as a pray-er then add that person’s request to your personal list, and pray faithfully for them. And prayer-requester, don’t forget to notify your pray-ers when your request is answered, even if it’s not answered in the way you…[Read more]
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ClaireC started the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Write your prayer request and tag at least 5 people to pray for you (so someone definitely sees it.) If you’re tagged as a pray-er then add that person’s request to your personal list, and pray faithfully for them. And prayer-requester, don’t forget to notify your pray-ers when your request is answered, even if it’s not answered in the way you…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic The Hobbit in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @winter-rose @ingridrd @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @kate-flournoy @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @dbhgodreigns @wordfitlyspoken @hannah-c @spradlin @i…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic The Hobbit in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @winter-rose @ingridrd @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @kate-flournoy @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @dbhgodreigns @wordfitlyspoken @hannah-c @spradlin…[Read more]
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BlueJay started the topic Types of Poetry in the forum Poetry 9 years, 7 months ago
Okay, so I’m starting to explore poetry and the different types. The ones I have discovered, I have loved, but I’m sure that there are plenty more out there.
So this is where you can put every type of poetry. (with an example would be good).
Let me tag a few people to get this going:
@hislittlerose, @daeus, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @kate-flou…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic The Hobbit in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Sorry guys. I’m being terribly slack. So we should be on the next two chapters. So I need a suggestion.
Does we…
1. Just do two chapters a week and plow our way through it?
Or…
2.Do we have a week in between for reading the next two chapters?People, it’s up to you. @graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapp…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@hope, @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @spradlin, @faithdk, @rolena-hatfield, @gretald, @ingridrd, @his-instrument, @christi-eaton, @timothy-young, @anna-brie, @gideon-sowdon, @warrioroftherealm, @EVERYONE!!!!!
Tagging you all again. 🙂 Does anyone know if the Beast has a name? Or is he just Beast? -
BlueJay started the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@hope HELP!!!!!! (And anyone else) @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @spradlin, @faithdk, @rolena-hatfield, @gretald, @ingridrd, @his-instrument, @christi-eaton, @timothy-young, @anna-brie, @gideon-sowdon, @warrioroftherealm, @EVERYONE!!!!!
I got a great idea, but the more I write it the more it…[Read more] -
BlueJay started the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@hope HELP!!!!!! (And anyone else) @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @spradlin, @faithdk, @rolena-hatfield, @gretald, @ingridrd, @his-instrument, @christi-eaton, @timothy-young, @anna-brie, @gideon-sowdon, @warrioroftherealm, @EVERYONE!!!!!
I got a great idea, but the more I write it the more it…[Read more] -
BlueJay started the topic Story book world-HELP! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@hope HELP!!!!!! (And anyone else) @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @spradlin, @faithdk, @rolena-hatfield, @gretald, @ingridrd, @his-instrument, @chrisit-eaton, @timothy-young, @anna-brie, @gideon-sowdon, @warrioroftherealm, @EVERYONE!!!!!
I got a great idea, but the more I write it the more it…[Read more] -
ClaireC posted an update 9 years, 7 months ago
Current Status – boring my mother as I tell her the entire plot of my book, (over several days) complete with names, backstory, ghosts, lies, truths, Thing-your-character-wants, Thing-your-character-needs, plot twists, etc. The whole load. She’s very patient. I’m finding it very useful to verbalize all my ideas, making sure everything makes sense.…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Alternative Historical Fiction Book Premise in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@daeus, @ingridrd, @gretald, @kate-flournoy, @jadamae, @anna-brie, emma-flournoy, @dragon-snapper, @blujay, @aratrea, @sarah-h, @winter-rose, @overcomer. I wrote out this long and detailed reply to you all, explaining all the things you were wondering about. And then…I accidentally shut down my computer and lost the whole thing! 🙁 So I’m sorry…[Read more]
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BlueJay posted a new activity comment 9 years, 7 months ago
@ingridrd 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 Thanks.
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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@anna-brie, sorry forgot the ‘@’ symbol in front of your name!
@clairec Thanks for the reminder. I’m sure I don’t thank Mommy enough for all that she does for us. I’ve begun to realize that she doesn’t have such a thing as free time; we 5 children take it all up. It’s hard for me to imagine making a sacrifice like that, every day, all my life like she has, and I really appreciate her. Three cheers for…[Read more]
@sarah-h. I call my parents Mummy and Daddy, but when I’m talking to other people, I generally say Mum and Dad.
@clairec It’s so true! My “mum” (I’m American, so I spell it “mom,” but I like the sound of “mum” more, for some reason… 😛 ) does so much for me, and I often take it for granted. 😉 Glad you’re able to sort out your plot and everything!
@gretald, Thanks! 🙂