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Ariel Ashira's profile was updated 8 years, 4 months ago
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine Why don’t you like Josiah’s stories?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 I am on!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira @alia @kaya-young @skredder @rochellaine Anyone on?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 Whenever I hear “superhero WIP” I become wary because I pretty much hate Josiah’s stories, but I’ll try to give an unbiased opinion. 😛
So…my first thought on reading your ideas was that if I read the book I would immediately think her grandparents were villains. Maybe you should play this up a bit, and either have her trust them…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira Yes, her grandparents really love her a ton. Kaylee was told her parents died in a car accident, but I want the accident to be linked to some superhero business of some sort (maybe they were heroes???). haven’t quite figured out the theme.
yeah I guess Pinterest boards can tell a lot about a person 😉
thank you! 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 What a cool bunch of ideas! I like what @skredder suggested. I will try to think of something, and let you know if I have any ideas. So, do her “grandparents” care a lot for her? What happened to her parents? And do you know what theme you might be using?
I think biracial people are beautiful. I guess one way you could let r…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@skredder ooh yeah that’s a good idea *writes it down* thank you! <3
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Skredder replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
I think the second option is good, but I also think that she should have met him at least a few times even if she was too young to remember properly. But what if he’s not a mad-scientist? What if he’s actually good but there are some bad people who caught onto his experiment and have been funding him? However, the experiment is ready for…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
Aaaaand forgot to tag people 😛 @rochellaine @kaya-young @alia @ariel-ashira @seekjustice @catwing @daughteroftheking @claire-c @skredder @ingridrd
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Jenna Terese started the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
Okay y’all…
Now that I’ve finished the first draft of my sci-fi dystopian (and diving into the edits), I’ve been picking my next book project from my endless list of plot bunnies. And I think I’m going with a superhero book, that I’ve actually partly outlined already.
But I’m having a bit of trouble getting the plot off the ground. I need some…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Sorry, I was having internet troubles ;D I don’t know why, but it just cut out.
No, I don’t really know any Youtubers, occasionally I watch a video on writing if it pops up, but I usually just read blogs.
Farewell (again!)
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Well, I really have to go now. Bye! 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice do you know of any writer youtubers? I watch Abbie Emmons’ videos, which aren’t all about writing, but creative life in general.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Awesome 😉
Now…what crazy late-night (well, late for me anyway 😉 ) things can we talk about? 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Yep, I’m still on 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice *slides in and waves sheepishly* um, hello again. I’m gonna stay awake a little longer, cuz I wanna get to a good stopping point in editing. So I’m gonna hold open my eyelids with toothpicks and eat something sugary. 😛 I’ll be on for about 20-30 minutes. You still here?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 (I love Zac as well. We have a support group for the end of this book too, just so you know) 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, yes that sounds familiar! I’ll have to check it out 🙂
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