@hybridlore
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellis — Elderstrand (Group 1)
Ellis slashed at one of the armored warriors, scoring the armor with a dark scorch mark, resisting more than it should have. His enemy swung a heavy fist at his head, and he ducked past it. A second opponent’s fist came out of nowhere,…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Marcel stumbled over to Sara and Felicity to fetch his staff. He held it in the crook of his bad arm and punched their shoulders with his other hand. “Nice job.”
They shared smiles for a split second. Marcel ran back into the fray. His hand…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Felicity- Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand
Felicity got shakily to her feet.
“Yep. Didn’t feel-” she stumbled suddenly, and Sara caught her.
“… a thing,” she finished. Her eyes were half glazed over, but she was still scanning the nearby area, ready to throw herself at any threat that came close.
“You okay?” she asked, trying to deflect.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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3 Ironwalkers down, 9 to go, if anyone was wondering. Pretty sure there were originally a dozen.
I’ll hold off on having Felicity fight anymore.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@jonas I was imagining the Ironwalkers as just enchanted suits of armor before. The fact that there’s something inside but they still don’t make any noise makes them a lot scarier.
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Felicity- Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand
Felicity took the staff gratefully. Her knuckles were raw and…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Sorry y’all, I might not be very active on the RP for the next week because I have a debate coming up, so feel free to toss Sara around wherever she needs to be.
Sara — Elderstrand, w/ Group 1
Silver music appeared in Sara’s vision as one of the strangers began playing on some…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I understand both your points. However, there are many instances in the Bible when God blessed or rewarded people after they told lies to save the lives of innocent people. Sabina brought up two such instances.
And, God has also told people to withhold truth/miss-lead. Like in 1 Samuel 16
The Lord said to Samuel,…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
The chunky creatures loomed over them, casting shadows over the soaked ground. They walked without sight or feeling, without head movement.
Someone cried out. It was the man with wind powers. He cradled his hand, and when the other young men…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh whoops we’ve been forgetting to tag @hybridlore
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I mean, they’re technically just NPCs, so yes, (though I would recommend using them sparingly.) In this case, I happen to agree with @rae‘s assessment and will be deploying them anyway, lol.
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Ellis — Elderstrand (Group 1)
Within a few seconds, the fight was…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
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LONG Section!!!!!
Darrien lost his job the next morning.
The Governor decided that if the main part of the city was rebuilt, the work could stop. This left a group of neighborhoods to the east in terrible disarray, and it wasn’t long before only thieves and war refugees inhabited them.
To e…
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge
Brutus held his drenched scarf up over his nose, his eyes shifting to the boy. He didn’t speak, he merely looked the boy up and down, before breaking out into a few coughs. Recovering himself, Brutus walked over the form of the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
We do need a plan, do we want to get out of the city?
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
Marcel cocked his head, amused, and shook his fists to loosen them back to normal. “You could have left us a couple soldiers…”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Leon and Julian– Group 1
Leon had his sword drawn in seconds, and before he engaged the first enemy, Julian was at his shoulder. For a moment it was a wild skirmish, and everything was shouts and blows in the dark.
All at once, the fight died away.
Julian wiped rainwater from his e…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, Julian, Fel, Ellis Sara, Marcellus, and the other Marcellus, our favorite neighborhood godling, Elderstrand Edge (I had fun typing that all out XD)
“You guys should make a quick plan!”
The wind around Brutus rose in int…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
More soldiers raced in. Marcel clenched his hands, and feathers laced around his fingers. Kicking up water, he swerved around around Ellis, who acted as final flaming barricade.
He deflected a sword with his staff. The soldier barked an unpleasant…[Read more] -
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @whalekeeper @grcr @hybridlore @loopylin
(Seeing how long these group names are getting, I’m just going to start calling this group “group one”.)
Ellis — Elderstrand (Group 1)
Ellis turned and was surprised to find another group of people. Marcel was talking to one of the strangers, who it appeared were just as…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)
“I’d be game for that as well,” Leon agreed. “Except that I don’t remember even coming here in the first place, and i definitely don’t know where to go if we got back out of t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Leon, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)
Marcel backed up a little, and the others in his group stepped forward. “Maybe there is nothing for it but to move on, find another city.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Wonderful. Glad it’s good.
I’ll take a look at the letter. Thanks! And yeah, I did a typo comb today. There were a lot. (yikes)
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