hybridlore

@hybridlore

*Straightens sunglasses*

@ellette-giselle

I’d say don’t kill the boys. You could bring them close, scare the living daylights out of the others, but don’t kill them.

I expected them to get captured and killed. It felt like “here we go again”. So many characters by this time have been killed, that it was almost…boring? Change…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yes you are you little…. little…… I don’t know what you are.

Dangerous person.

@whalekeeper

Lol. I’m having a great day. Having a lot of fun plotting my next book and building character boards and aesthetics.

@hybridlore

Oh good grief.

I’m gonna do it.

I’m gonna save him.

Eric’s gonna live.

How on earth did you get me to do that?

I can’t believe I’m going to do this.

You are dangerous.

Also @ellette-giselle @hybridlore I just saw your character death intervention and I’m quite entertained by it. 😂 Y’all are feeding the #savethecharrie movement. People on here never change.

@hybridlore

True. I’m not denying that he isn’t young. He’s just not shockingly young. Especially in that age and culture, he’s considered a man and could have a family and kids.

Eric is still a kid in there eyes.

And no, i can’t change the age because i’d have to do rewrites in the first book and I don’t want to. lol. plus, that makies him…[Read more]

@hybridlore

He’s not THAT young. Adrian was younger then him when he died.

@ellette-giselle

Do you think it’s fine as long as this is the last one……. (for a while.)

This appears to be what is moving the Ardentaians and some of the soliders to question who the Christians are.

I think part of the problem is that, yes, this is causing more people to become Christians, and that is good of course, but characters are disap…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Look, if you can get at least two more people on this forum to agree with you……….

@hybridlore

Stop it.

Go away.

I literally have my finger hanging over the delete button for that scene.

@hybridlore

I don’t know……… what would I even do with him if he survived?

(Besides get him married and all that.)

@hybridlore

But I already submitted it this way. I can’t change it now, KP won’t let me edit that post……………

@hybridlore

Oh shut up.

You’re actually going to convince me to save him.

lolololol.

@linus-smallprint

@hybridlore wants me to save Eric.

What are your thoughts?

@hybridlore

i don’t know.

Maybe.

I’ll think about it.

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NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Joseph sat at the table and stared at his plate. Noah and Darrien had already eaten and were pulling on their boots. They knew the hard day of work they had ahead, and they had been able to eat

Sabina put her arm over Joseph’s sh…

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@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr

Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge

Flare and Ben looked at on another. They nodded. Off they went towards the river jumping roof over roof.

Ben felt tired, of course he’s tired, he’s old. I’m getting too old for this, Ben thought as he landed on a roof, catching h…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

@hybridlore

Drat.

KP isn’t letting me know that y’all responded!

Grrr.

Hmm, it looks like I really stirred it up around here. lol.

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NEXT SECTION

Sorry it’s so short.

Joseph woke. For a long moment he lay, trying to figure out what was happening and where he was. He had been so exhausted he didn’t even remember lying down. There was an odd sound, a sound he knew he had heard many times be…

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@hybridlore

You’re so secretive! What are you hiding? 🤨

Wouldn’t you like to know.

Sadly, I have to jump off now, so I won’t be able to post the next section! I have some stuff I need to get done today.

Maybe I can get it to you this afternoon. Otherwise, you’ll just have to try to get to sleep tonight. lol.

@hybridlore

Oh that would be dark.

hey, I’m the one asking questions. not answering them.

lololol.