@hybridlore
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m glad I’m funny. When you use these quotes in your books be sure to credit me. *sniff of importance*
🤣🤣🤣
Yeah, I may toss it. Both of them actually.
I thought about a floor washing scene and/or playing scene. I’ll have to see. I did a few but didn’t like how they were turning out.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank you. Yeah, I like drawing emotional scenes, but I need to narrow down my picks. Like I said, this is round two of narrowing down. These are the ones that were allowed to get past the rough sketch stage.
For some reason, the faces in the one of Asher and Eric (whoever’s on the left, his mouth is too slanted, I think.) and the o…
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Koshka replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
*Incoherent squealing*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Okay, now I have some for The Veil of Night. So, there are a lot more, but I don’t believe all of these will actually make it into the book. I already scrapped ten of them, and I feel like some more will end up going. (I had 45 for LTBL, but as you can see, only like 16 a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
YAHOOO!!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yes, I can!
It’s pretty cool!
So, you read LTBL, right?
Do you feel like I’m missing any important scenes? Are you disappointed that i didn’t draw something? etc.
Also, which one(s) are your favorite?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Once y’all have a chance to look and comment, I’m going to delete these.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
That’s better!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore Depends on what you have. Did it not update after the Aquatic update? As in, the most recent creatures you have are dolphins and tropical fish? So there are no axolotls, goats, frogs, bees, sniffers, striders, wardens, piglins or armadillos? You’re in legacy console edition, which stopped updating a while ago. You won’t be able to get…[Read more]
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I think pointing a little more vaguely gives an intrigue. Reading those I would guess/really hope that these meetings are Christian, but if I was an unbeliever I might not. This makes it so that we can experience this hope that she has found along with her, instead of being told who/what she has placed her hope in.
For example, I had…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Hey! I recognize some of those Cole quotes! 😉
So glad you were able to find some you liked!
I really love these boards. You really have got skill with them.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay…. I’ve been playing around a bit. You have a really strong style for the blurb. You’re hitting key intrigue rhythms and you’ve got enough catch words…. you just kinda give too much. (at least in my opinion.) Okay…. see how you feel about these.
Denver, 2053
Aspiring journalist Sara Bauer has synesthesia–a c…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Your welcome, looking forward to the next chapter!
 Ellette mentioned she would prefer for it to share less about the overall plot. I wondered if other people agreed with that too.
I thought it was fine, although I think if you did remove parts about the main plot more than it would be more intriguing.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 3 months ago
Your welcome, and yeah, sometimes they do lol
We shall see… thank you for the votes, btw.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 3 months ago
Aw, thank you!! Glad you liked it!!
(And I have to agree, not a big fan of the girls)
Yikes, that would be a chaotic kitchen 😅
Lol, seems like a baker’s nightmare. Also, your votes have successfully been changed 👍
Can’t blame you for disliking those characters, they need a lot of work lol
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Just caught up with this, and it’s great!! Seriously, everything was really good, I love your style and I’m already so invested in this story, can’t wait to read more!!
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Andrew replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I have a feeling you’ll enjoy some of the underground church chapters, or maybe be able to help me with some of what the pastor says.
REALLY!?! Awww, yeaaaah! I’m going to enjoy those chapters :}
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