hybridlore

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Okay, that’s two against me.

Glad you like the map!!

I’ll take a look at that section and see what I can do by way of trimming a few things up………

what do you think, @linus-smallprint ?

@hybridlore

Yeah. I’ll see what @linus-smallprint and @keilah-h say, and from there I’ll make a decision once I have everyone’s opinion.

I think I could end up trimming things up a little if I need to.

Well, I know the belief in Divine Election is not held by everyone. Some people believe that anyone who chooses to be saved can be saved,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle whoa I love that map!!

also, I agree with @hybridlore about how the section’s a little long. I realize that the answers to Joseph’s questions have to be properly explained–after all, I would say corrupting God’s message is far worse then never including it in the first place–but I, like her (hybridlore you are a girl right??…[Read more]

@rae

Oh, btw, neat deduction! Sounds a little Sherlock Homsy.

@jonas

Well, I would say now, except that @raxforge isn’t active at the moment so we can’t get his characters to move.

I guess give us a few in case he decides to make his way over here. Otherwise we might just have to abandon him.

@rae

No worries. It’s okay to call him Barron. I think i have his names down now.

Oops, I forgot to call Baron Brutus in the rp. Sorry.

@jonas @beth-torres

Klethen — Elderstrand (w/ Ilahna and Everett)

Klethen was about to reply when he was kicked to the ground. Despite being caught off guard, he was able to turn his fall into an awkward sideways roll and landed only slightly out of breath.

The stranger who had attacked him demanded to know where they were and pointed a sword a…[Read more]

@hybridlore  @keilah-h  @linus-smallprint

For anyone interested, here is the current map.This is what everything looks like in this book.

@hybridlore

Lol, I was wondering when you would start wanting the backstory.

First I’ll reply to yoyr note on the scene.

You might want to consider trimming it down, but if you can’t, that’s fine. Just try to think about what will move the character growth forward and work for this story/target audience specifically.

So, it wasn’t sup…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle
(No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)

Yeah. Funny you mention growing faster than a kitten when I have one trying to eat my shirt right now (She literally has the hem in her mouth XD)

“You’re elbows are sharper then normal elbows should be.”

Lol!

@grcr @raxforge (the one who needs to rp) @ellette-giselle

Baron (Brut…[Read more]

*phew*

OKAY. Finally. After many ages, I am finished. why did that TAKE ME FOREVER oh hey is that a wrinkle? am I an old woman now? lol

@rae

I think it was kinda cool!

Oh, well thanks! 😄

Lol that was a very amusing reaction

Lolol 😁

Oh, the swish cheese days lol 😂

@rae @ellette-giselle @raxforge

Marcellus — the edge of Everstrand | with Ben G…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

How did you know GRCR was RPing?

I used my superpower that allows me to see what KPers are doing.

jkjk

Actually, it was simple deduction. I knew from the community tab that she was still signed in to KP, and according to the Recent Topics tab, she wasn’t posting anything in other forums so I assumed she was simply typing a long…[Read more]

@rae

wow. How did you know GRCR was RPing?

@rae @ellette-giselle

Wow.

Crickets.

I thought the speech was pretty good myself……………

Lol, it was good! I’m trying to figure out what to respond with…. Sorry I am so slow right now. I think the rain out here is getting to my head lol.

I’m almost done with my rp…

@ellette-giselle

I have written an rp but I think GRCR is currently writing one so I’m waiting to see if my theory is correct to avoid contra rp’s

@rae  @grcr   @raxforge

Wow.

Crickets.

I thought the speech was pretty good myself……………

@hybridlore  @keilah-h  @linus-smallprint

Alrighty people! Have fun with this very long section! I hope you enjoy it.

Also, Linus, I am starting to have some high hopes for this book, despite what I said about it not being my favorite. I think i might enjoy it a lot. Just let me know if it’s starting to feel like a LTBL repeat. (If you would b…[Read more]

@rae  @grcr   @raxforge

Leon and Julian—with Baron, Ben Gunn, Flare, and Marcellus, Everstrand edge (No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)

“I wasn’t going to kill…Ben,” Baron mentioned in his quiet monotone.

Julian turned and cocked his head sideways, a grin pulling at the corner of his mouth. “You sure had me fooled.”

Le…[Read more]