hybridlore

@power

You are nuts.

Plain and simple.

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

Thanks y’all! This was so great to come home to!

I’m glad y’all liked Adrian’s reintroduction! It’s one of my favorite scenes.

Ah, thanks Linus for the typo catches.

There we go, there is that Ardenta mistrust appearing.

Yes. Glad you caught that! Not only is the poor kid traumatized by soldiers, (as alluded to in…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHHH!!!!! LOVE THIS!!! I think this is gonna be my favorite book yet!!!

As for the PTSD triggers, if you could list all the triggers under the names of the two guys, i can help you try to brainstorm ways they would avoid them. At the moment, I’m not sure which triggers they would be. I mean, for some soldiers after war,…[Read more]

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @rae @grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper

Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the c…[Read more]

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge

Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the c…[Read more]

Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the city, and Ben and Flare fell off the roof on us. Then our newest c…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I echo Linus’s statement–this was a great way to re-introduce Adrian to the narrative!

@power I had a song on in the background that started epic then turned really goofy as I read your little poem and it was perfect for it lolllll

thing is, it was by complete coincidence.

@freed_and_redeemed oooh nice scene!!

@mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lollll-XD

Life/Writing Update, Request for Brainstorming Help, and maybe a scene snippet👀

Hiiii everyone!!! Y’all may have noticed that I’m not super active here on KP anymore😅 Truth is, life has been kinda hectic,…[Read more]

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rar @grcr @raxforge

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Leon, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare) This name list is so long. XD

“I’m Marcel.” He held Leon’s hand firmly. His speech was quieter and more gutteral than the other’s, and he made a conscious effort to raise it over the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Whoa, what happened to Brutus’ speech?

When whispering, /s/ and /t/ are most pronounced and can be overheard. Brutus often replaces these sounds with /th/ when whispering. It’s a precaution.

@ellette-giselle no it’s not bad, I just haven’t read it yet. Lol

@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore  @grcr @rae @raxforge

Leon and Julian –> with Baron, Ben Gunn, Marcellus, and Flare, meeting up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel. Elderstrand edge.

Leon narrowed his eyes. He couldn’t be sure… but were those feathers on the stranger’s shoulders? He shook the thought aside. “We also came from ou…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr @rae @raxforge

Leon and Julian –> with Baron, Ben Gunn, Marcellus, and Flare, meeting up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel. Elderstrand edge.

Leon narrowed his eyes. He couldn’t be sure… but were those feathers on the stranger’s shoulders? He shook the thought aside. “We a…[Read more]

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr @rae @raxforge is that everyone?

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara)

Before answering, Marcel glanced at Ellis, who still watched the road. The sword-wielding young man gave a nod. The soldiers had passed them.

“We came from outside the city,” Marcel called. “The soldiers think we’re…[Read more]

wow.

crickets.

I didn’t think it was THAT bad.

lololol

@rae

Whoa, what happened to Brutus’ speech?

@grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @hybridlore @loopylin @jonas

Leon and Julian –> with Baron, Ben Gunn, Marcellus, and Flare, about to meet up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel. Elderstrand edge.

Leon squinted through the rain. The storm was muting the other sounds around them, but he was sure h…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks! 😁😁

@grcr

aw! Love it!!!!