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@freed_and_redeemed

I mean like I’m one to talk… XD

I’m surprised no one’s called the Character Exploitation Hotline on me yet…

@savannah_grace2009

WHYYY

Heh

Heh

Hehhhhhhh

@rae

*offers several boxes of tissues*

@ellette-giselle

Chapter four was really smooth and was a lot easier to follow! I don’t have hardly any comments.

Except maybe one thing…maybe give more detail about why Julius is so mad that Marcus is missing. It just kind of shows Julius “throwing a fit” for no apparent reason. Maybe show us his thoughts about why is is scared/angry and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I am so sorry…I just can’t keep up with the ammount of chapters you write

That’s insane XD XD

I will try to go over chapter 3/4 soon, I forgot where I left off!!

But about the plot, I was just wondering what your storyline looked like.

I was concerned that you might not have enough plot for a full novel, but since it’s a…[Read more]

I can never get your tag right apparently 🤦🏻‍♀️

@ellette-giselle

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@estelle-giselle Yes, exactly what Rae said!!🥰 Plus, we’re all chill here. we barge into each other’s conversations all the time; it’s alright😂 I’ve been on KP for 2 years (technically; I deleted my account a few months back and created a new one after taking a very short break (and apparently breaking everyone, whooopsssssss))

and the person…[Read more]

@theshadow and here you are! I’ll stop in a minute to draw your lovely character. 😀

 
Chapter 13
Julius’ leaned his head wearily against the wall. His eyes felt like they had sand in them, and he was weary beyond imagining. Yet, he couldn’t bring himself to close his eyes and sleep. The nightmares were worse then the waking fear.

Marcus was asl…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay, that explanation works. However, this being the first chapter and all, readers will assume that that is just an innate characteristic of Paynes. Furthermore, Kratos shouldn’t expect the smell, and you might want to make him remark to himself about it.

Okay good point XD XD

Unless… How do you want the other Andromedan races to come acr…

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@princesachronicle22 all righty then!

Depending on when you’re able to do it, I might not be able to reply until tomorrow, though.

@theshadow thanks! I’m glad you were willing to listen to my randomness

@rae

Hi REA,

did the picture come through for you, or do I need to try and send it again?

@theshadow

Here’s the next one. I wonder what happened to Sara. She had said she had some thoughts, but it looks like she vanished. lol. Let me know what you think!

 
Chapter 12
“Ignatius, what’s going on?” demanded Julius.

“I’m doing what I came to do all along. It took me a while to wonder about without your guidance, but I managed. It seems…[Read more]

@theshadow here you go! Sorry it took a sec!

 
Chapter 11
Julius stood staring out of his window. It was not fully dark yet, and he was having a hard time waiting. After almost two months, he would finally come face to face with Marcus again. It seemed like they had been separated by a lifetime. Julius didn’t know what to expect. Love for his f…[Read more]

@theshadow

That’s right where I want you. XD

Keep an eye out, I’m about to post the next chapter.

@rae

I understand the feeling, like you’re barging into a stranger’s house when you’re new here,

YES!!!! Or also when you step into a room of people and see a group who are obvoiusly all friends and all know each other, and they are talking and having a good time, and you like, “i would really like to join them, but I also don’t know them and I…[Read more]

@theshadow

Awesome. I’ll make sure to keep that in mind.

I might have art soon >:]