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@ellette-giselle

I’d join too…except I don’t write enough to have a competition XDD

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, Jonas has a point, though he really does seem to be poking holes just for fun. lol. (I would be scared to death if he found my WIP, but then again the help would be gladly accepted after i stopped being a little frustrated. lol.)

He does have some good points though.

Also, from the perspective of someone who…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, I love that chapter. Sef and Lilitu are adorable.

@freed_and_redeemed

I bet people have said this before, but you should get that published! Honestly, I would read it!

Hmm….. Maybe I should start braking hearts around here. I have a few good stories in my collection. You and I could compete to see who can brake the most hearts on Kingdom Pen!! *evil laughter* (totally…. maybe…. kinda…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alriiight, Chapter 1. Please tell me if you get overwhelmed with all the feedback, because if that happens, I will gladly pause.

Her father wouldn’t meet her eyes. And in that instant she knew.

Her father didn’t love her.

Sooo I get this weird feeling about Nico. I’m not entirely convinced he doesn’t love them, nor do I kno…[Read more]

@rae

You’re welcome! Glad you got it!

Oh man! I’m dying to know what you think! lol.

@savannah_grace2009

Awesome! I love it!!The way Sef makes friends, that is so classic little kid, and I just love their interaction! It’s so perfect! The only thing I would say was when it said Cassian “ran, trying to outrun himself” I would use the word, “sprinted,” “bolted,” etc. Otherwise it’s a repeat that kinda grates for people like me.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I am so sorry…I just can’t keep up with the ammount of chapters you write

Haha, that’s ok! Thank you for the help you have been giving! It’s been awesome!

I was concerned that you might not have enough plot for a full novel,

I wanted it to be a novella, I just wasn’t sure if I could fully develop the plot in a novella, but it…[Read more]

@grcr

Thank you!!! <3

@rae

I didn’t know Sef and Lilitu knew each other that long!

Yeah me neither… 

I just came up with it as I was writing it XD

@keilah-h I know; it’s been a long time coming 🥰😂

@grcr don’t worry….he’ll get there soon 👀

@rae I do understand. Forgiveness is a lot harder than people realize, and though I tend to forgive others fairly easily and instead withhold forgiveness more from myself, I do understand how hard it can be💖

But don’t worry, Leon will get…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I was expecting to not be able to type cuz the keyboard would be fuzzy, but I was pleasantly surprised!

Good for Leon!

And I totally get not wanting to forgive someone. I still can’t bring myself to forgive someone for insulting the memory of my Grandmother not even six months after her passing, let alone someone who killed…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Awwww, so cute <333

I didn’t know Sef and Lilitu knew each other that long!

@freed_and_redeemed

Awh. Don’t crush my hopes like that! I was so happy for Leon before I got to the end. 😠

Im kidding, but seriously. He was so close… 😭😭

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I got it. Sorry about not replying, but doing so would tempt me to disclose some of my thoughts before July 11th.

Thx for checking though!

@freed_and_redeemed awwww yay! Leon’s taking steps in the right direction at least.

@savannah_grace2009 @rae @mineralizedwritings @koshka @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

Since I showed y’all where Riker is, here’s the most recent Leon scene👀

“‘And we know that all things work together for good to them that love God, to them who are the called according to his purpose.’”

Tears burned Leon’s…

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@savannah_grace2009

Awwwwww, that is so cute!! I like how you’re connecting the families in this chapter.

“Hi!” she smiled at him. “Do you want to be friends? Look at my drawing! My name’s Sef, what’s your name?”

The boy sat down next to her. “What is it?” he tilted his head to the side, staring at the drawing.

Sef was offended. How c…

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DROPPING THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Just so you know, it’s not edited…heh…heh…

so just bear with me XD

Tags: @jonas @grcr @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @rae @and-my-brain-stopped-working

“Please! Someone help me!” Neveah gasped for breath, frantically scanning the crowds for a familiar face.

Where could Sef have gon…

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