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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I had to run and do something before I could read the feedback. (oh the pain!)But I just finished it!! Thank you so much for all the time and work you put into this! These are some really great suggestions and even if some of them make me sigh and go, “oh dear, really?” they make sense and it’s just me cringing at the idea of…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
That’s better!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
*dances around the room cheering!*
*Races back to laptop to read feedback*
YAY!!! SO EXCITING!!! I’m opening it right now!!!
(It feels like Christmas!!!!) lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
@rae wow! That was even more intense than the last one.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I tend to associate an update with what mobs it added.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@hybridlore Depends on what you have. Did it not update after the Aquatic update? As in, the most recent creatures you have are dolphins and tropical fish? So there are no axolotls, goats, frogs, bees, sniffers, striders, wardens, piglins or armadillos? You’re in legacy console edition, which stopped updating a while ago. You won’t be able to get…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
what would to him at the dinner table?
Doesn’t have to be the same Timmy.
Or he could be a more likely animal to be at the table, like a dog. People sometimes let dogs at the dinner table.
….and people who’ve been stranded with their sled dogs have sometimes eaten them.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 7 months ago
@the_lost-journal hmmmm….I’ve never really been able to pick favorites……
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint He looks great! What kinda creature is he? I see he’s kinda like a kentor, but more elk-ish and less man.
The way you did his legs is very cool–digitigrade/unguligrade bipeds are hard (you can ask me, I have four species of d-grades) , but you pulled it off really nicely. I also like how you annotated the fact that his hands…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@stephie lolllll
nahh the last one is funny, if Timmy happens to be a turtle or a seagull. He doesn’t have to be human.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
This is one of those subjects that I consider to be a “hill I will die on”
yeah I agree
It’s not just a life being taken away, it’s a life that will never be. It can’t think yet, can’t defend itself. It isn’t aware what they’re doing to it is wrong. It will never experience life outside.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m left-handed, so I have to do it backwards if I want to avoid smudging my work.
I use gloves. My dad has some thick plastic ones he uses when dealing with drug evidence. (He’s a Detective.) and he let’s me have a pair. They work well. I think you can find gloves like that for working on cars or maybe even cleaning. T…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I did it to Adrian and no one thought that was too soon.
It happens in real life and I think it works well.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I think pointing a little more vaguely gives an intrigue. Reading those I would guess/really hope that these meetings are Christian, but if I was an unbeliever I might not. This makes it so that we can experience this hope that she has found along with her, instead of being told who/what she has placed her hope in.
For example, I had…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Hey! I recognize some of those Cole quotes! 😉
So glad you were able to find some you liked!
I really love these boards. You really have got skill with them.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay…. I’ve been playing around a bit. You have a really strong style for the blurb. You’re hitting key intrigue rhythms and you’ve got enough catch words…. you just kinda give too much. (at least in my opinion.) Okay…. see how you feel about these.
Denver, 2053
Aspiring journalist Sara Bauer has synesthesia–a c…[Read more]
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