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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even accidentally imply it’s okay. You don’t want to give your reader an idea, or thought pattern they didn’t have, but you do want to reach for a kid who’s been there, or is there, and needs that lifeline. That they are loved, that they can make it with God’s he…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Arcane and Alder are good name switches! I like them. Also, are you going to keep the Payne and Pythonos references? I think you should; when you publish your book people will be like “oh, this is an expansion on that universe.”
I think I will keep the Payne/Pythonos. I agree, it would be cool!!!!
Thanks, they fit really well and I lik…[Read more]
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Enid started the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
How do you want to improve?
(To be clear, choose a couple writing skills you want to improve, or a bad habit, and explain!)I’m pretty good at writing things in an abnormal way (such as strange metaphors), but I don’t think abnormality is definitely, certainly, indubitably good. It can be confusing. It’s often detail-oriented, without giving the…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah… 😳 I was seriously stressed out.
Lol XD
I think the rough sketch looks really good, regardless of whether it’s accurate. I like the shirt folds. (I cannot figure out cloth for the life of me.)
Thank you!!
Yeah folds…they’re really crazy sometimes… XD XD
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Ahhhh, ok. Yeah that sounds less scary. Very interesting.
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Enid replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
I think the rough sketch looks really good, regardless of whether it’s accurate. I like the shirt folds. (I cannot figure out cloth for the life of me.)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
lol sounds good! I’ll start on him today!
I am glad you stopped…
Lol what does that mean? I messed up pretty bad, eh? 😂
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Enid replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh my goodness I have been trying to log into KP
Oh nooo, Wyoh is banishing you too? I haven’t had any problems, so maybe I’m a ghost whisperer.
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Enid replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
*is in bliss*
XD I was pretty satisfied too. While drawing, that is.
The harder or darker a line, the more shadow I expect it to be in. If it is light and slightly broken, I expect it to be in direct light or even a glare.
Ooohh, how did I not think of this?? That is a very good point, thank you. I suppose it might help if I fill…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
😅 Here is what i started… you may not find it to be that creepy but yeah… eh.
I think i messed up a little—like he needed to hang more rathe…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh my goodness I have been trying to log into KP and it hasn’t been working ahh thank goodness its finally working what is wrong with it what is going on why in the world have I been locked out whaaaaa???????? 😭😭😮💨🤧
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Enid replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
AAHH it looks so good!!! I love how you did the hair texture!!
That’s definitely a good representation of her. And it didn’t take you very long either, that’s crazy. <3
I don’t even know why. I think it was trying to kill me or something.
So you risked your life on my behalf. 🤣 Thank you so much. <3
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Not sure. It’s been going on ever since they hit the new town.
Maybe page 14?
I’ll have to look if you can’t find it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!
I hope not, this is like the only “social media” I use outside of using youtube posts to share my fan art sometimes.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@ellette-giselle thank you!!! I’m really proud of it. I’m planning to keep digitally redrawing the sketches I did for that story (it’s one of my favorites thanks to all the creatures I got to design for it lol)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.
true, but even if you change it to another female name they might still be after you.
Ehh, just
Any thoughts on this whole “White Knight” business?
hmm? I must’ve missed that chapter (happens sometimes), how far back is it so I can read through it?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.
Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.
lso, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
@the_lost-journal exactly.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Also, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of the empire is turning to God, but I can’t help but wonder if you’re setting them up with nice things only to have it all come crashing down later…….Knowing you XD
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