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Koshka replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
In my defense, they were literally threatening a 5 year old with a knife, and stalking a 14 year old. Those creeps deserved vinegar and The Button.
It’s not like I killed anyone.
*Eyes Ellette and Ruth* XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
Cute!
Dragon^2 XD
The dragon gives me so. Many. Questions. (How would a creature like that swallow? What happens when it has to yawn? Sneeze? Cough? Can it eat with both mouths?)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Sypher
“Super powers?” He frowned, his eyes falling to the desk in front of him. Tiny water droplets crowded together giving the wood a bubbled, speckledy look. Syph shooed them away.
“Super powers. I like that, but…” His brother’s voice, angry and scared, echoed from a not distant enough memory. “No, I’m a water Sprite.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
YES?!?!! XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Okay! I did a Sypher RP above.
Hope you get to feeling and sleeping better. Sounds like both you and Barnes need a good rest.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Btw, did y’all see the watercolor Syph my sister posted to the art section a bit back?
Syph
“I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”
Syph blinked, flushed blue, then white. The air in the classroom hung he…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 months ago
I need to work on consistency, which I get is mostly self-discipline (and which is something I’ve always had to work on, writing life aside). I want to write, but I don’t have to write, and there are many things in my life right now that I have to do. Setting aside a specific time to do what I want, even when I’m tired, has been hard. But I’m tr…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Callan’s….oof. I
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
*Slowly freaks out*
November scenes!!! She’s writing again!! November! Ara! Ahhhhhhhhhhh-
*Freaking out escalates tenfold*
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
As for the other stuff, I really appreciated the themes you worked with. That we can’t love ourselves as we should through our own eyes. We have to see us (and others) through God’s love, light, hope. That isn’t easy, but it’s worth it.
I liked the order, how you spliced poem and story together. It made it easy to read and follow.
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Wow. That sixth story was dark, but I know it’s needed.
It’s sad how many people indulge in self harm just “trying to feel”, but since it looks “normal”, like tattoos, piercings, or extreme diets, other people don’t see it for what it is.
My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
*Cracks knuckles*
First off, that sounds awesome.
Second, Thursday? That’s a pretty tight crunch, but you can do this. Right? Right.
I’ll read through and give what thoughts I have ect. and (if you’d like) typos/errors I catch. What type of accountability do you want? I can email you daily, you can email me, whatever you…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
It looks like we’ll be at a church training thing this Saturday, so I probably won’t be able to join. That said, you’re welcome to send an email link, and if I happen to be free I’ll bounce on.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
*Splutter of laughter*
Fish person? How is Syph like a fish person, pray tell?
Syph
So he didn’t have to “get a girl”, whatever that meant. He turned to give Ellie a grateful smile before shifting narrowed eyes to the Rax Boy.
What was that supposed to mean? A good natured challenge, or a patronizing ‘let the Little…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Syph
He had to what? He blinked at Eddie. A dark blue flush crept up his neck. Water droplets appeared and disappeared in the air around him.
“Oh. Guppies. For a dance? But I don’t know of any other spritelings to pair with. It could take an indefinite amount of time to even find someone who wouldn’t be—oh tadpoles—…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months, 1 week ago
The P.S. is beautiful. It closes out the letter (and story) in a satisfying, simple end. In my opinion, very good.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Syph
Ball room? He’s seen something, a large sign on his way to school. But now, that had said Ball Pit. Surely they weren’t the same thing. How was one supposed to dance in a ball room?
Wildly. He could do that.
“Tonight. Oi, that is agreeable.”
Although he’s have to find this Room of Balls too. The misty whisp tightened…[Read more]
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