@hope
Active 4 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Catwing replied to the topic Breathing hope… the puns are going to be too much fun in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years, 3 months ago
@hope I like it. Only thing I see that you could do is say Writing in the Light: breathing hope into the blackest of nights. Added ‘of’ Maybe???
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Breathing hope… the puns are going to be too much fun in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years, 3 months ago
@hope Brutally honest… that’s us Kapeefers. XD I think your tagline is a good one. I don’t know if this means anything, but in my head I’m reading it as “darkest night.” I like “blackest night” better, but I read it, and remembered it as “darkest.” Probably isn’t important. Forgive my rambling.
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Jess replied to the topic Breathing hope… the puns are going to be too much fun in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years, 3 months ago
@hope I like it. The two lines together sound fine together. But the word “breathing” is a little weird to me… I’m not really sure what’s wrong with it, it just doesn’t sound right?
I like the tagline as opposed to no tagline. I think it fits well.
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Gracie replied to the topic Christ Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
You guys are the bestistest, you know that? XD
@Daeus
Those are really good thoughts on what Jesus suffered. And, great point: think it through. I will. In fact, I know where I’m gonna look first. I just finished reading through Hebrews the night before last, and I was blown away by how it laid out the reasons for why Jesus had to die on the…[Read more] -
Gracie started the topic Christ Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
‘Sup KeePers?
I has a question.
Just yesterday I had this crazy cool idea for an allegory, and I’m thinking about making it into either a short story or a small novella depending on how much gold I find at the bottom of the rubbish pile. 😛
But I’ve hit a head-scratcher already. (And I haven’t even had the idea for 24 hours. Oi.)How do you…[Read more]
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Gracie started the topic Christ Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
‘Sup KeePers?
I has a question.
Just yesterday I had this crazy cool idea for an allegory, and I’m thinking about making it into either a short story or a small novella depending on how much gold I find is at the bottom of the rubbish pile. 😛
But I’ve hit a head-scratcher already. (And I haven’t even had the idea for 24 hours. Oi.)How do you…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@shannon I’m bad at explaining too. But in the simplest way possible.
Writer’s Corner:
1. You write in your novel or edit or whatever while someone else does in their novel.
2. When you’re done, you post that up here, and tell how much you got done. Some people like to have a word race, but we don’t have those much anymore. @kate-flournoy and @hope…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Way too many cliches in one place in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@hope Well, it could work, but just remember to keep the woman flat.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I'm concerned my story is a bad allegory in the forum Fantasy 7 years, 3 months ago
@Allison-Grace hey! Welcome to KP. 🙂
While I agree with every point made in that video, I don’t believe that just because a story has a few (or even all, necessarily) of those ‘cliche’ elements that it’s a bad allegory.
What do I mean by that?
Well, the problem with cliches is that so often they’re written just ‘because that’s the way things are…[Read more] -
Northerner replied to the topic Critique wanted for Snow White retelling in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 3 months ago
@Graciegirl, aw, thanks!
@Kate-flournoy, it is possible that both of us could win, but I understand. Same to you!
@Emma-flournoy, @Hope that’s okay. The Dragon Snapper will take care of it.
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Gracie started the topic Writing Conventions/Conferences/Contests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
Hey-o, my fellow KeePers!
I’ve recently begun to consider attending writing conventions/conferences, but I have a teensy problem: I don’t currently have a way of finding out about these opportunities.
So.
As a first step, I’ve created this thread to be a place where we can all share news about any conventions/conferences or contests we hear…[Read more]
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Northerner started the topic Critique wanted for Snow White retelling in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 3 months ago
I wrote a novelette for Camp NaNo. It’s woefully under the upper limit, which is kind of a good thing, and very unsettling, because that never happens to me. At the moment it’s a rough draft, somewhere around 12,000 words.
This is intended for submission to Rooglewood’s contest, so if you’d like to read it but think you wouldn’t give fair…[Read more]
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Help! I need a plot! 🙂 in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
Now to tag a few people… (Feel free to add your thoughts even if you weren’t tagged 🙂 )
@kate-flournoy @daeus @aratrea @ethryndal @dragon-snapper @jane-maree @brandon-miller
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Hannah R. replied to the topic Six-Word Story Contest in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
Okay, @rkj @hope and others… is this month’s six-word story prompt not the MOST AMAZING PICTURE YOU’VE EVER SEEN!!!??? I kind of started hyperventilating when I saw it because it’s so phenomenal. I want to be there. I want an eagle that big. And you KNOW there’s a story behind it! AHHHHH…..
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Daeus replied to the topic My Time Travel Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 3 months ago
@hope Sure.
@his-instrument While I don’t have time to completely beta read it, I could brainstorm with you about the overall plot, characterization, theme, and stuff like that. I might be able to beta read the first couple chapters too, just for stylistic stuff. I don’t know for sure, but we’ll wait and see. -
Daeus started the topic My Time Travel Book in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 3 months ago
Greetings KeePers,
For those of you who don’t know, I’ve been working on a time-travel novel over the past few months. I wrote it, edited it, got some feedback, and then edited it again.
So this baby’s out of his diapers and ready to walk around. What I’d appreciate is some helping hands to mature this story into something great (aka beat…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Six-Word Story Contest in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
Welcome to KP @rjk! I’m actually not sure of that myself… @Hope @Brandon-Miller @Rolena-Hatfield?
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Six-Word Story Contest in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
Thanks @Daeus @That_Writer_Girl_99 @Ethryndal @Hope. 🙂 I’ll let you know how it goes.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
Hello guys… I have a health prayer request, which is unusual for me. About a week ago one of my little siblings and I had an accidental collision and the top of her head hit the underside of my jaw, jamming it back into its socket and doing some damage to the muscles and such. At first we actually thought a part of my jaw might be broken, but it…[Read more]
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