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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Thank you for the input. I shall see what I can do. *alright words. You are at my command, so why don’t you do something*
@perfectfifths Oh goody! I need picky people. 😛 Thanks for the edits! I need them all!
@rolena-hatfield Hmm…I see what you mean. *note to self for future reference*
@ethryndal Shorty Stories… Ah,…[Read more] -
Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@Hope The evil henchman frog. 😀
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Please someone, anyone, I implore you on bended knee… draw Josiah the Wiser, sporting his scraggly coarse tarantula beard, with a frog (grinning evilly) on his head. Anyone who can draw, please try… if you need references, just look at his avatar, or watch the Stereotype videos
@Daeus
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@Kina-Lamb
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I can’t actually do any writing right now, but I wanted to leave a question here for y’all to answer.
For the KeePers who have a blog…why did you start it? What do you generally post on there?I’m considering starting one, but I’m not totally sold on the idea. What would I post on it? What would I talk about?
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Snapper started the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum 7 years, 6 months ago
Hi guys! @daeus @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @aratrea @rolena-hatfield @f5a8c3e9 @hope @perfectfifths @winter-rose @jess @emma-flournoy @northerner @overcomer @anyone else
So, I working on a short story mystery for a contest due this month, and I was wondering if you all could critique this for me. It’s 970 words or so, and…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum 7 years, 6 months ago
Hi guys! @daeus @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @aratrea @rolena-hatfield @f5a8c3e9 @hope @perfectfifths @winter-rose @jess @emma-flournoy @northerner @overcomer @anyone else
So, I working on a short story mystery for a contest due this month, and I was wondering if you all could critique this for me. It’s 970 words or so, and can’t…[Read more] -
Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < Question-Asker < Professors etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < Question-Asker < Professors etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < Question-Asker < Professors etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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Michael Stanton started the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 6 months ago
As you walk through the various areas of the castle, you notice leader boards in various forms and at various locations displaying the current ranks of the Stewards of the Pen for all to see. Except, only the stewards can see it somehow? Anyway, “The Board” (currently) Reads:
Troll-Thingy < Serf < ?TBD by vote? < ?other TBDs? < etc. … < Dark…[Read more]
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